Hi Winston,
two comments:
Unless you opt-in to ongoing SMS messaging, the mobile phone number
you input on the website will be used and stored only for the purpose
of sending this one-time message and to provide abuse blocking, where
available.
If I negate that sentence, I get:
If you opt-in to ongoing SMS messaging, we can do whatever.
Also, you're making the grammar of that sentence harder to understand
than necessary. I think the policy should be simple English as much as
possible, given that many non-native speakers will read it.
"If you opt-out to ongoing SMS messaging, ...." says the same thing.
Though it's more obvious that you're not really qualifying what one
would opt-in to. Which is my first comment.
Axel
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