Hi RFC Editor, If we move those references to Informative References because our I2NSF Applicability Draft will be an Informational RFC. Could you publish our I2NSF Applicability Draft?
I CC the Security Area AD, Roman Danyliw for his opinion. Roman, Could you say your opinion on this reference issue? Thanks. Best Regards, Paul On Fri, Jul 17, 2020 at 3:52 AM RFC Editor <[email protected]> wrote: > Greetings, > > We will update the document as requested, but please note that the > changes described below do not remove the normative reference holds on > this document. The following Internet-Drafts are listed as normative > references; this document cannot move forward in the publication > process until these documents are also approved for publication: > > draft-ietf-i2nsf-consumer-facing-interface-dm > draft-ietf-dots-architecture > draft-ietf-i2nsf-nsf-facing-interface-dm > draft-ietf-i2nsf-nsf-monitoring-data-model > draft-ietf-i2nsf-registration-interface-dm > > Note that you do not need to send us an updated XML file as these I-Ds > are updated. We will update these entries to refer to the RFC numbers > as part of our publication process. > > Please let us know if you have any questions. > > Thank you, > RFC Editor/sg > > > On Thu, Jul 16, 2020 at 12:10:40PM +0900, Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong wrote: > > Hi RFC Editor, > > > > Our draft is in the state of MISSREF with the five drafts. > > (https://www.rfc-editor.org/cluster_info.php?cid=C405 < > https://www.rfc-editor.org/cluster_info.php?cid=C405>) > > > ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- > > draft-ietf-i2nsf-consumer-facing-interface-dm NOT-RECEIVED > > draft-ietf-dots-architecture RFC-EDITOR > > draft-ietf-i2nsf-nsf-facing-interface-dm NOT-RECEIVED > > draft-ietf-i2nsf-nsf-monitoring-data-model NOT-RECEIVED > > draft-ietf-i2nsf-registration-interface-dm NOT-RECEIVED > > > ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- > > > > Except for draft-ietf-dots-architecture, other drafts will take more time > > until they are approved as RFCs by IESG. > > > > Could you use the latest versions of the I2NSF-relevant drafts for the > publication of our draft? > > > ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- > > [consumer-facing-inf-dm] > > Jeong, J., Chung, C., Ahn, T., Kumar, R., and S. Hares, > > "I2NSF Consumer-Facing Interface YANG Data Model", draft- > > ietf-i2nsf-consumer-facing-interface-dm-09 (work in > > progress), July 2020. > > > > [nsf-facing-inf-dm] > > Kim, J., Jeong, J., Park, J., Hares, S., and Q. Lin, > > "I2NSF Network Security Function-Facing Interface YANG > > Data Model", draft-ietf-i2nsf-nsf-facing-interface-dm-09 > > (work in progress), May 2020. > > > > [nsf-monitoring-dm] > > Jeong, J., Chung, C., Hares, S., Xia, L., and H. Birkholz, > > "I2NSF NSF Monitoring YANG Data Model", draft-ietf-i2nsf- > > nsf-monitoring-data-model-03 (work in progress), May 2020. > > > > [registration-inf-dm] > > Hyun, S., Jeong, J., Roh, T., Wi, S., and J. Park, "I2NSF > > Registration Interface YANG Data Model", draft-ietf-i2nsf- > > registration-interface-dm-08 (work in progress), March > > 2020. > > > ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- > > > > There are version-ups for the following drafts. > > Could you use the latest versions of them? > > > ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- > > [dots-architecture] > > Mortensen, A., Reddy, T., Andreasen, F., Teague, N., and > > R. Compton, "Distributed-Denial-of-Service Open Threat > > Signaling (DOTS) Architecture", draft-ietf-dots- > > architecture-18 (work in progress), March 2020. > > > > [policy-translation] > > Jeong, J., Yang, J., Chung, C., and J. Kim, "Security > > Policy Translation in Interface to Network Security > > Functions", draft-yang-i2nsf-security-policy- > > translation-06 (work in progress), May 2020. > > > > [tls-esni] > > Rescorla, E., Oku, K., Sullivan, N., and C. Wood, "TLS > > Encrypted Client Hello", draft-ietf-tls-esni-07 (work in > > progress), June 2020. > > > ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- > > > > Also, I2NSF Terminology Draft[i2nsf-terminology] expired, so I would > like to > > replace [i2nsf-terminology] with [RFC8329], and remove > [i2nsf-terminology] as > > citations in the text and its reference paragraph from the text. > > > ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- > > [i2nsf-terminology] > > Hares, S., Strassner, J., Lopez, D., Xia, L., and H. > > Birkholz, "Interface to Network Security Functions (I2NSF) > > Terminology", draft-ietf-i2nsf-terminology-08 (work in > > progress), July 2019. > > > > [RFC8329] Lopez, D., Lopez, E., Dunbar, L., Strassner, J., and R. > > Kumar, "Framework for Interface to Network Security > > Functions", RFC 8329, February 2018. > > > ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- > > > > There is the addition of IANA Considerations Section as follows. > > Could you include this new section? > > > ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- > > 10. IANA Considerations > > This document does not require any IANA actions. > > > ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- > > > > I attach the revised draft's xml and pdf files with the above changes. > > > > Could you move this draft forward to publish it as an RFC? > > > > Thanks. > > > > Best Regards, > > Paul > > -- > > =========================== > > Mr. Jaehoon (Paul) Jeong, Ph.D. > > Associate Professor > > Department of Computer Science and Engineering > > Sungkyunkwan University > > Office: +82-31-299-4957 > > Email: [email protected] <mailto:[email protected]>, > [email protected] <mailto:[email protected]> > > Personal Homepage: http://iotlab.skku.edu/people-jaehoon-jeong.php < > http://cpslab.skku.edu/people-jaehoon-jeong.php> > -- =========================== Mr. Jaehoon (Paul) Jeong, Ph.D. Associate Professor Department of Computer Science and Engineering Sungkyunkwan University Office: +82-31-299-4957 Email: [email protected], [email protected] Personal Homepage: http://iotlab.skku.edu/people-jaehoon-jeong.php <http://cpslab.skku.edu/people-jaehoon-jeong.php>
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