Hi Roman, We're hoping you can provide some input here. Moving references into or out of the Normative section requires AD approval.
Thank you, Sandy On Fri, Jul 17, 2020 at 08:40:50AM +0900, Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong wrote: > Hi RFC Editor, > If we move those references to Informative References > because our I2NSF Applicability Draft will be an Informational RFC. > Could you publish our I2NSF Applicability Draft? > > I CC the Security Area AD, Roman Danyliw for his opinion. > > Roman, > Could you say your opinion on this reference issue? > > Thanks. > > Best Regards, > Paul > > On Fri, Jul 17, 2020 at 3:52 AM RFC Editor <[email protected]> > wrote: > > > Greetings, > > > > We will update the document as requested, but please note that the > > changes described below do not remove the normative reference holds on > > this document. The following Internet-Drafts are listed as normative > > references; this document cannot move forward in the publication > > process until these documents are also approved for publication: > > > > draft-ietf-i2nsf-consumer-facing-interface-dm > > draft-ietf-dots-architecture > > draft-ietf-i2nsf-nsf-facing-interface-dm > > draft-ietf-i2nsf-nsf-monitoring-data-model > > draft-ietf-i2nsf-registration-interface-dm > > > > Note that you do not need to send us an updated XML file as these I-Ds > > are updated. We will update these entries to refer to the RFC numbers > > as part of our publication process. > > > > Please let us know if you have any questions. > > > > Thank you, > > RFC Editor/sg > > > > > > On Thu, Jul 16, 2020 at 12:10:40PM +0900, Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong wrote: > > > Hi RFC Editor, > > > > > > Our draft is in the state of MISSREF with the five drafts. > > > (https://www.rfc-editor.org/cluster_info.php?cid=C405 < > > https://www.rfc-editor.org/cluster_info.php?cid=C405>) > > > > > ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- > > > draft-ietf-i2nsf-consumer-facing-interface-dm NOT-RECEIVED > > > draft-ietf-dots-architecture RFC-EDITOR > > > draft-ietf-i2nsf-nsf-facing-interface-dm NOT-RECEIVED > > > draft-ietf-i2nsf-nsf-monitoring-data-model NOT-RECEIVED > > > draft-ietf-i2nsf-registration-interface-dm NOT-RECEIVED > > > > > ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- > > > > > > Except for draft-ietf-dots-architecture, other drafts will take more time > > > until they are approved as RFCs by IESG. > > > > > > Could you use the latest versions of the I2NSF-relevant drafts for the > > publication of our draft? > > > > > ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- > > > [consumer-facing-inf-dm] > > > Jeong, J., Chung, C., Ahn, T., Kumar, R., and S. Hares, > > > "I2NSF Consumer-Facing Interface YANG Data Model", draft- > > > ietf-i2nsf-consumer-facing-interface-dm-09 (work in > > > progress), July 2020. > > > > > > [nsf-facing-inf-dm] > > > Kim, J., Jeong, J., Park, J., Hares, S., and Q. Lin, > > > "I2NSF Network Security Function-Facing Interface YANG > > > Data Model", draft-ietf-i2nsf-nsf-facing-interface-dm-09 > > > (work in progress), May 2020. > > > > > > [nsf-monitoring-dm] > > > Jeong, J., Chung, C., Hares, S., Xia, L., and H. Birkholz, > > > "I2NSF NSF Monitoring YANG Data Model", draft-ietf-i2nsf- > > > nsf-monitoring-data-model-03 (work in progress), May 2020. > > > > > > [registration-inf-dm] > > > Hyun, S., Jeong, J., Roh, T., Wi, S., and J. Park, "I2NSF > > > Registration Interface YANG Data Model", draft-ietf-i2nsf- > > > registration-interface-dm-08 (work in progress), March > > > 2020. > > > > > ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- > > > > > > There are version-ups for the following drafts. > > > Could you use the latest versions of them? > > > > > ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- > > > [dots-architecture] > > > Mortensen, A., Reddy, T., Andreasen, F., Teague, N., and > > > R. Compton, "Distributed-Denial-of-Service Open Threat > > > Signaling (DOTS) Architecture", draft-ietf-dots- > > > architecture-18 (work in progress), March 2020. > > > > > > [policy-translation] > > > Jeong, J., Yang, J., Chung, C., and J. Kim, "Security > > > Policy Translation in Interface to Network Security > > > Functions", draft-yang-i2nsf-security-policy- > > > translation-06 (work in progress), May 2020. > > > > > > [tls-esni] > > > Rescorla, E., Oku, K., Sullivan, N., and C. Wood, "TLS > > > Encrypted Client Hello", draft-ietf-tls-esni-07 (work in > > > progress), June 2020. > > > > > ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- > > > > > > Also, I2NSF Terminology Draft[i2nsf-terminology] expired, so I would > > like to > > > replace [i2nsf-terminology] with [RFC8329], and remove > > [i2nsf-terminology] as > > > citations in the text and its reference paragraph from the text. > > > > > ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- > > > [i2nsf-terminology] > > > Hares, S., Strassner, J., Lopez, D., Xia, L., and H. > > > Birkholz, "Interface to Network Security Functions (I2NSF) > > > Terminology", draft-ietf-i2nsf-terminology-08 (work in > > > progress), July 2019. > > > > > > [RFC8329] Lopez, D., Lopez, E., Dunbar, L., Strassner, J., and R. > > > Kumar, "Framework for Interface to Network Security > > > Functions", RFC 8329, February 2018. > > > > > ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- > > > > > > There is the addition of IANA Considerations Section as follows. > > > Could you include this new section? > > > > > ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- > > > 10. IANA Considerations > > > This document does not require any IANA actions. > > > > > ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- > > > > > > I attach the revised draft's xml and pdf files with the above changes. > > > > > > Could you move this draft forward to publish it as an RFC? > > > > > > Thanks. > > > > > > Best Regards, > > > Paul > > > -- > > > =========================== > > > Mr. Jaehoon (Paul) Jeong, Ph.D. > > > Associate Professor > > > Department of Computer Science and Engineering > > > Sungkyunkwan University > > > Office: +82-31-299-4957 > > > Email: [email protected] <mailto:[email protected]>, > > [email protected] <mailto:[email protected]> > > > Personal Homepage: http://iotlab.skku.edu/people-jaehoon-jeong.php < > > http://cpslab.skku.edu/people-jaehoon-jeong.php> > > > > > -- > =========================== > Mr. Jaehoon (Paul) Jeong, Ph.D. > Associate Professor > Department of Computer Science and Engineering > Sungkyunkwan University > Office: +82-31-299-4957 > Email: [email protected], [email protected] > Personal Homepage: http://iotlab.skku.edu/people-jaehoon-jeong.php > <http://cpslab.skku.edu/people-jaehoon-jeong.php> _______________________________________________ I2nsf mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/i2nsf
