On 17/02/2022 17:00, Linda Dunbar wrote:
Hello Working Group, Many thanks to the authors to address all the comments from YANG Doctor review. This email starts a three-weeks Working Group Last Call for https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-i2nsf-consumer-facing-interface-dm/
I think that this is premature. As ever, there is substantial overlap with other I-D in the set, notably nsf-facing, and, as ever, the two I-D do things differently which I think can only confuse. If there is a reason for the differences, then that needs calling out IMHO; at the moment it seems arbitrary, such as which ...art reviewer last saw the I-D!
Further, nsf-facing has just attracted a large number of comments from IESG Review, many if not most of which apply here. I think it wrong for the IESG to be asked to do the same work all over again so I think that the IESG comments on nsf-facing need resolving with the IESG first and then the agreed solution - I expect that most of the comments by the IESG will be accepted - can be incorporated into this I-D.
Choice of protocols, reference for protocols, way of specifying ranges of numbers, indeed way of specifying at all, string language, volte, RFC793 redundant, all those comments by Alexey on lack of clarity, Rob's comments on identity descriptions, example labelling and so on.
Tom Petch
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