Hi Linda, Patrick and I will revise the Consumer-Facing Interface YANG Data Model Draft according to Tom's comment early next week.
Also, we will submit the revised drafts of NSF-Facing Interface and Monitoring Interface YANG Data Models according to the IESG's comments early next week, too. Thanks. Best Regards, Paul On Wed, Mar 16, 2022 at 5:43 AM Linda Dunbar <[email protected]> wrote: > I2NSF WG, > > Since the comments from Tom Petch haven't been addressed, we can't > complete the WGLC for draft-ietf-i2nsf-consumer-facing-interface-dm-16. > Agree with Tom, the WG needs to reach consensus if it is necessary for > the draft-ietf-i2nsf-consumer-facing-interface-dm to be consistent with > the draft-ietf-i2nsf-nsf-facing-interface-dm. > > Thank you, > Linda Dunbar > > -----Original Message----- > From: I2nsf <[email protected]> On Behalf Of t petch > Sent: Wednesday, March 2, 2022 11:20 AM > To: Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong <[email protected]> > Cc: [email protected]; Patrick Lingga <[email protected]>; > skku-iotlab-members <[email protected]> > Subject: Re: [I2nsf] WGLC for > draft-ietf-i2nsf-consumer-facing-interface-dm-16 > > On 02/03/2022 14:40, Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong wrote: > > Hi Tom, > > Patrick and I are finalizing the revision of the NSF-Facing Interface > > YANG Data Model Draft this week. > > If I read it aright, the cut-off for updated I-D for the upcoming IETF is > next Monday. after which the system is in purdah for a while. The IETF > website might tell me about the latter (if it had a search engine:-) > > Tom Petch > > > > > > After this revision, we will reflect the comments from IESG on this > > Consumer-Facing Interface YANG Data Model Draft. > > > > Thanks for your comments. > > > > Best Regards, > > Paul > > > > > > On Wed, Mar 2, 2022 at 9:31 PM t petch <[email protected]> wrote: > > > >> > >> On 17/02/2022 17:00, Linda Dunbar wrote: > >>> Hello Working Group, > >>> > >>> Many thanks to the authors to address all the comments from YANG > >>> Doctor > >> review. > >>> > >>> This email starts a three-weeks Working Group Last Call for > >> https://nam11.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fdat > >> atracker.ietf.org%2Fdoc%2Fdraft-ietf-i2nsf-consumer-facing-interface- > >> dm%2F&data=04%7C01%7Clinda.dunbar%40futurewei.com%7C0fd53b962cbb4 > >> 208379608d9fc70f6f5%7C0fee8ff2a3b240189c753a1d5591fedc%7C1%7C0%7C6378 > >> 18384373805664%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJWIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAiLCJQIjoiV2 > >> luMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C3000&sdata=F7VLxYYqc6kpxD3 > >> w15O7Lewbot4zMgkGcozhpKViuJY%3D&reserved=0 > >> > >> I think that this is premature. As ever, there is substantial > >> overlap with other I-D in the set, notably nsf-facing, and, as ever, > >> the two I-D do things differently which I think can only confuse. If > >> there is a reason for the differences, then that needs calling out > >> IMHO; at the moment it seems arbitrary, such as which ...art reviewer > last saw the I-D! > >> > >> Further, nsf-facing has just attracted a large number of comments > >> from IESG Review, many if not most of which apply here. I think it > >> wrong for the IESG to be asked to do the same work all over again so > >> I think that the IESG comments on nsf-facing need resolving with the > >> IESG first and then the agreed solution - I expect that most of the > >> comments by the IESG will be accepted - can be incorporated into this > I-D. > >> > >> Choice of protocols, reference for protocols, way of specifying > >> ranges of numbers, indeed way of specifying at all, string language, > >> volte, > >> RFC793 redundant, all those comments by Alexey on lack of clarity, > >> Rob's comments on identity descriptions, example labelling and so on. > >> > >> Tom Petch > >> > >>> This poll runs until March 10, 2022. > >>> > >>> We are also polling for knowledge of any undisclosed IPR that > >>> applies to > >> this Document, to ensure that IPR has been disclosed in compliance > >> with IETF IPR rules (see RFCs 3979, 4879, 3669 and 5378 for more > details). > >>> If you are listed as an Author or a Contributor of this Document, > >>> please > >> respond to this email and indicate whether or not you are aware of > >> any relevant undisclosed IPR. 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