Hi Paul I reviewed your updated text as well as the attachment from SECDIR review and I am all set.
Thank you Gyan On Thu, May 26, 2022 at 11:47 AM Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong < [email protected]> wrote: > Hi Gyan, > First of all, I thank you for your review and comments. > Here is my answer to your comments. > ----------------------------------------------------------------------- > *OLD:* > > Appendix A. XML Examples of I2NSF Registration Interface Data Model > > This section describes XML examples of the I2NSF Registration > Interface data model under the assumption of registering several > types of NSFs and querying NSF capability. > A.1. Example 1: Registration for the Capabilities of a General Firewall > > This section shows an XML example for registering the capabilities of > a general firewall in either IPv4 networks [RFC5737] or IPv6 networks > [RFC3849]. > > > > *NEW:* > *Appendix A. XML Examples of I2NSF Registration Interface Data Model* > > This section shows XML examples of the I2NSF Registration Interface > data model for registering the capabilities in either IPv4 networks > [RFC5737] or IPv6 networks [RFC3849]. > > ----------------------------------------------------------------------- > > I believe that two XML examples in Appendix A are useful to let the > audience use > this Registration Interface YANG Data Model in order to register the > capabilities of an NSF > as well as the performance capability and NSF access information with > Security Controller. > Note that both the performance capability and NSF access information do > not exist in > the I2NSF Capability YANG Data Model. > > I attach the revised draft (-18) to be submitted to the IETF repository > after receiving and reflecting > the comments from Secdir later. > > Thanks. > > Best Regards, > Paul > > On Thu, May 26, 2022 at 1:30 PM Gyan Mishra via Datatracker < > [email protected]> wrote: > >> Reviewer: Gyan Mishra >> Review result: Ready >> >> I reviewed the draft and the draft is well written and ready to be >> progressed >> for publication. >> >> One comment below. >> >> Appendix A contains XML examples of I2NSF Interface Data. >> >> Draft below also referenced by this draft contains as well the same >> identical >> examples but calls it examples of registration of capabilities and not >> registration interface data. >> >> As this draft is about the Yang Data and Information model for I2NSF >> registration interface between the security controller and DMS and not >> about >> registration capabilities data model defined in draft below, I think the >> entire Appendix A can be removed from the draft. >> >> >> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-i2nsf-capability-data-model >> >> >> >> _______________________________________________ >> I2nsf mailing list >> [email protected] >> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/i2nsf >> > -- <http://www.verizon.com/> *Gyan Mishra* *Network Solutions A**rchitect * *Email [email protected] <[email protected]>* *M 301 502-1347*
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