Hi Gyan,
Here is the revision of the Registration Interface Draft for your comments
below:
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-i2nsf-registration-interface-dm-18

I can see your point that it is technically copied from the Capability Data
Model:
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-i2nsf-capability-data-model

Since my intent is to show how to actually show an example of
the Registration of an NSF's Capability using the Registration Interface.
I believe that it will be better to reduce the number of examples shown in
Appendix A.
We show one example to illustrate how to use the Registration
Interface (with the "performance-capability") in the I2NSF system.

The update in the revision is as follows:
Appendices A.2 through A.6 are removed as the examples shown in
those Appendices are redundant since basic examples are shown in
Appendix A.1.  Also, the contents of Appendix A.1 are merged to
Appendix A.

Thanks.

Best Regards,
Paul
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On Thu, May 26, 2022 at 1:30 PM Gyan Mishra via Datatracker <
[email protected]> wrote:

> Reviewer: Gyan Mishra
> Review result: Ready
>
> I reviewed the draft and the draft is well written and ready to be
> progressed
> for publication.
>
> One comment below.
>
> Appendix A contains XML examples of I2NSF Interface Data.
>
> Draft below also referenced by this draft contains as well the same
> identical
> examples but calls it examples of registration of capabilities and not
> registration interface data.
>
> As this draft is about the Yang Data and Information model for I2NSF
> registration interface between the security controller and DMS and not
> about
> registration capabilities data model defined in draft below,  I think the
> entire Appendix A can be removed from the draft.
>
>
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-i2nsf-capability-data-model
>
>
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