Gyan, Thanks for your confirmation. Best Regards, Paul
On Fri, May 27, 2022 at 3:53 AM Gyan Mishra <[email protected]> wrote: > > Hi Paul > > I reviewed your updated text as well as the attachment from SECDIR review > and I am all set. > > Thank you > > Gyan > > > On Thu, May 26, 2022 at 11:47 AM Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong < > [email protected]> wrote: > >> Hi Gyan, >> First of all, I thank you for your review and comments. >> Here is my answer to your comments. >> ----------------------------------------------------------------------- >> *OLD:* >> >> Appendix A. XML Examples of I2NSF Registration Interface Data Model >> >> This section describes XML examples of the I2NSF Registration >> Interface data model under the assumption of registering several >> types of NSFs and querying NSF capability. >> A.1. Example 1: Registration for the Capabilities of a General Firewall >> >> This section shows an XML example for registering the capabilities of >> a general firewall in either IPv4 networks [RFC5737] or IPv6 networks >> [RFC3849]. >> >> >> >> *NEW:* >> *Appendix A. XML Examples of I2NSF Registration Interface Data Model* >> >> This section shows XML examples of the I2NSF Registration Interface >> data model for registering the capabilities in either IPv4 networks >> [RFC5737] or IPv6 networks [RFC3849]. >> >> ----------------------------------------------------------------------- >> >> I believe that two XML examples in Appendix A are useful to let the >> audience use >> this Registration Interface YANG Data Model in order to register the >> capabilities of an NSF >> as well as the performance capability and NSF access information with >> Security Controller. >> Note that both the performance capability and NSF access information do >> not exist in >> the I2NSF Capability YANG Data Model. >> >> I attach the revised draft (-18) to be submitted to the IETF repository >> after receiving and reflecting >> the comments from Secdir later. >> >> Thanks. >> >> Best Regards, >> Paul >> >> On Thu, May 26, 2022 at 1:30 PM Gyan Mishra via Datatracker < >> [email protected]> wrote: >> >>> Reviewer: Gyan Mishra >>> Review result: Ready >>> >>> I reviewed the draft and the draft is well written and ready to be >>> progressed >>> for publication. >>> >>> One comment below. >>> >>> Appendix A contains XML examples of I2NSF Interface Data. >>> >>> Draft below also referenced by this draft contains as well the same >>> identical >>> examples but calls it examples of registration of capabilities and not >>> registration interface data. >>> >>> As this draft is about the Yang Data and Information model for I2NSF >>> registration interface between the security controller and DMS and not >>> about >>> registration capabilities data model defined in draft below, I think the >>> entire Appendix A can be removed from the draft. >>> >>> >>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-i2nsf-capability-data-model >>> >>> >>> >>> _______________________________________________ >>> I2nsf mailing list >>> [email protected] >>> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/i2nsf >>> >> -- > > <http://www.verizon.com/> > > *Gyan Mishra* > > *Network Solutions A**rchitect * > > *Email [email protected] <[email protected]>* > > > > *M 301 502-1347* > >
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