Hi Donald, Thanks for your review and correction on Consumer-Facing Interface YANG Data Model Draft.
I will reflect your comment on the revision. Thanks. Best Regards, Paul 2022년 8월 3일 (수) 오전 8:20, Donald Eastlake <[email protected]>님이 작성: > Hi, > > I have looked at this draft and support publication. > > However, I am doubtful about the following sentence: > > The efficient and flexible provisioning of network functions by a > Network Functions Virtualization (NFV) system leads to a rapid > advance in the network industry. > > This seems a bit too broad. Perhaps > > The efficient and flexible provisioning of network functions by a > Network Functions Virtualization (NFV) system supports rapid > deployment of newly developed functions. > > > Thanks, > Donald > =============================== > Donald E. Eastlake 3rd +1-508-333-2270 (cell) > 2386 Panoramic Circle, Apopka, FL 32703 USA > <https://www.google.com/maps/search/2386+Panoramic+Circle,+Apopka,+FL+32703+USA?entry=gmail&source=g> > [email protected] > > Hello Working Group, > > Many thanks to the authors to address all the comments from YANG Doctor > review. > > This email starts a three-weeks Working Group Last Call for > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-i2nsf-consumer-facing-interface-dm/ > > This poll runs until March 10, 2022. > > We are also polling for knowledge of any undisclosed IPR that applies to this > Document, to ensure that IPR has been disclosed in compliance with IETF IPR > rules (see RFCs 3979, 4879, 3669 and 5378 for more details). > If you are listed as an Author or a Contributor of this Document, please > respond to this email and indicate whether or not you are aware of any > relevant undisclosed IPR. The Document won't progress without answers from > all the Authors and Contributors. > > If you are not listed as an Author or a Contributor, then please explicitly > respond only if you are aware of any IPR that has not yet been disclosed in > conformance with IETF rules. > > Thank you. > > Linda > > _______________________________________________ > I2nsf mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/i2nsf > -- =========================== Mr. Jaehoon (Paul) Jeong, Ph.D. Associate Professor Department Head Department of Computer Science and Engineering Sungkyunkwan University Office: +82-31-299-4957 Email: [email protected], [email protected] Personal Homepage: http://iotlab.skku.edu/people-jaehoon-jeong.php <http://cpslab.skku.edu/people-jaehoon-jeong.php>
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