On Thu, Aug 05, 2010 at 03:15:40AM +0200, Seiichi Kawamura wrote: > This is a very nice approach. So 4.2.1 would be like > > 4.2.1. Shorten as Much as Possible > If at least two consecutive 16-bit 0 fields are present, the > symbol "::" MUST be used, and used to its maximum capacity. > For example, 2001:db8::0:1 is not acceptable, because the symbol "::" > could have been used to produce a shorter representation 2001:db8::1.
I think this change makes it read better: s/, and used/, and it MUST be used/ /js -- Juergen Schoenwaelder Jacobs University Bremen gGmbH Phone: +49 421 200 3587 Campus Ring 1, 28759 Bremen, Germany Fax: +49 421 200 3103 <http://www.jacobs-university.de/> -------------------------------------------------------------------- IETF IPv6 working group mailing list ipv6@ietf.org Administrative Requests: https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ipv6 --------------------------------------------------------------------
