--- In [email protected], "ai3131" <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> 
wrote:

> > > "Just outside the city there is wetland. There, one finds 
> > crocodiles, *lions, deer, ducks, cranes, hawks, swallows, tanuki-
> > like creatures called "raccoons", frogs, and a large variety of 
> > insects, including an abundance of mosquitoes. The place is most 
> > interesting and beautiful, but the hydrology has been disturbed 
to 
> > divert water for human use and to drain land for development."
 
> OK, here goes (nothing)...
> 
> "Machi no kôgai ni numachi ga arimasu.Asoko ni wani ya hyôshi ya 
> shika ya kamo ya tsuru mo ga imasu. Sara ni,taka ya tsubame ya 
> RAKKUUN ya kaeru mo ga imasu. Saigo ni iro-iro no mushi-ka itte 
> takusan no ka ga imasu. Tokoro wa totemo omoshirokute utsukushii 
> desu. Demo, ningen benri no tame ni mizu wa magiremashita. 
> Jûtakuchitai no tame ni numachi wa nagasemashita. Sore de, asoko 
no 
> suitai ga midasemashita."
> 
> The sentence containing all the animals would be a run-on 
sentence, 
> in Japanese or English, so in translation I broke it up into three.
> 
> I do not know how to link more than two dependent clauses within a 
> sentence in Japanese, so I had to separate the last sentence into 
> three. Sorry.
> 
> - Arian I.

A corrected version of your translation is as follows:

> Machi no kôgai ni numachi ga arimasu. SOKO ni WA wani ya HYOU ya 
> shika ya kamo ya tsuru ["mo" deleted] ga imasu. Sara ni, taka ya 
tsubame ya 
> TANUKI NI NITA RAKKUUN TO YOBARERU DOUBUTSU ya kaeru mo ["ga" 
deleted] imasu. MATA takusan no ka O FUKUMU SAMAZAMANA mushi-MO 
imasu. SOKO wa totemo KYOUMIBUKAKU utsukushii TOKORO
> desu. SHIKASHI, ningen GA TSUKAU tame ni mizu NO NAGARE GA 
KAERARE, KAIHATSU no tame ni KANTAKU SARETA TAMENI SOKO NO 
> suitaiKEI WA MIDARETESHIMAIMASHITA."

Kamui






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