On Wed, Oct 30, 2013 at 08:44:27PM +0100, Michael wrote: > > FWIW, thanks for the reminder that I need to keep working at it. As > > I said at the top, I /am/ aware of the situation... > > If I may offer some help there... after writing a paragraph, read > again what you just wrote [...]. Second, reread it again, see if you > can shorten stuff [...]. Use details *sparely* and only when a true > benefit is visible or a point you like to make does not work without > the details. Then write the next paragarph, do the same there.
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