On Mon, Jul 25, 2011 at 13:01:13 (CEST), Luca Barbato wrote:

> ---
>  src/index |    8 ++++++--
>  src/shame |   11 ++++++-----
>  2 files changed, 12 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)
>
> diff --git a/src/index b/src/index
> index 128fb57..58987b1 100644
> --- a/src/index
> +++ b/src/index
> @@ -16,8 +16,12 @@ on your choice of configuration options. If you use
> Libav or its constituent
>  libraries, you <b>must</b> adhere to the terms of the license in question.
>  You can find basic compliance information and get licensing help on our
>  <a href="legal.html">license and legal considerations page</a>.
> -Note that if you violate our license terms, we will track you down, list
> -you on our <a href="shame.html">Hall of Shame</a> and eventually sue you.
> +Please note that because of GPL §4 (or LGPL §8), violating o
> license

Surely there are proper entities for the § sign.

moreover, it should read 'violating _our_ license'. (not 'o license').

> +will terminate your rights to our work. However, we are willing to work
> +with you to a solution should such a situation occur.

to find a soltion 

> +License violations are managed on our <a
> href="http://bugzilla.libav.org";>bug
> +tracker</a> and we keep a page with the unresponsive
> +<a href="/shame">violators</a> to make the public aware of them.
>  </p>
>   <p>
> diff --git a/src/shame b/src/shame
> index fa68899..a7abc21 100644
> --- a/src/shame
> +++ b/src/shame
> @@ -4,15 +4,16 @@ LIBAV_LEGAL_NAVBAR
>   <p>
>  This is a list of projects or companies violating Libav's license. The
> list
> -is part of an effort to get them to comply with the licensing terms by
> shaming
> -them in public.
> +is part of an effort to get the public aware of them.

does 'to raise public awareness' sound better to native speakers?

> +We are working on settling violations quickly so that the software in
> +question can be moved to our Hall of Fame as soon as possible.
>  </p>
>   <p>
>  A good way to help us is to link to this page, thereby boosting its
>  pagerank, possibly near or past the homepage of the offender. We
> discourage
> -you from using or buying the software listed here, unless you do so to
> pester
> -its producers and demand that they comply with the license of Libav.
> +you from using or buying the software listed here, unless you do so to
> demand
> +that they comply with the license of Libav.
>  </p>
>   <p>
> @@ -21,7 +22,7 @@ Our issue tracker also contains a list of
>  If you become aware of license infringements, please notify us on the
>  <a href="contact.html">libav-devel mailing list</a> and/or add
>  it to our
> -<a href="https://roundup.libav.org/";>issue tracker</a>.
> +<a href="https://bugzilla.libav.org/";>issue tracker</a>.
>  </p>
>   <p>

rest reads OK to me.

-- 
Gruesse/greetings,
Reinhard Tartler, KeyID 945348A4
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