On 11/10/14 18:40, Joe Perches wrote:
> On Sat, 2014-10-11 at 18:31 +0200, Rasmus Wriedt Larsen wrote:
>> * fix multiple quoted string split across lines style issues
>> * change printk(KERN_NOTICE to pr_notice
>> * insert spaces after , in function call
> []
>> diff --git a/init/calibrate.c b/init/calibrate.c
> []
>> @@ -160,9 +158,7 @@ static unsigned long calibrate_delay_direct(void)
>>
>> }
>>
>> - printk(KERN_NOTICE "calibrate_delay_direct() failed to get a good "
>> - "estimate for loops_per_jiffy.\nProbably due to long platform "
>> - "interrupts. Consider using \"lpj=\" boot option.\n");
>> + pr_notice("calibrate_delay_direct() failed to get a good estimate for
>> loops_per_jiffy.\nProbably due to long platform interrupts. Consider using
>> \"lpj=\" boot option.\n");
>
> This would be better on 2 lines:
> pr_notice("calibrate_delay_direct() failed to get a good estimate for
> loops_per_jiffy.\n"
> "Probably due to long platform interrupts. Consider using
> \"lpj=\" boot option.\n");
Yes, indeed it would. (will fix in upcoming patch)
> The grammar is poor though and this
> could be better phrased.
Any suggestions? I don't see anything in particular (but English is not my
native language either)
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