Alvaro – Your comment was to put quotes:
<snip> I would recommend using quotes in the appendix: OLD> 1. The Router ID SHOULD be identical to the value advertised in the Traffic Engineering Router ID TLV (134) if available. NEW> 1. The "Router ID SHOULD be identical" to the value advertised in the Traffic Engineering Router ID TLV (134) if available (Section 3.1). <end snip> My response was: <snip> [Les:] So I am willing to make the change. But I have to say that for me as a reader the use of quotes as you suggest does not aid clarity. I have no idea why the entire sentence should not be quoted as without the unquoted portion of the sentence the meaning of the quoted part is incomplete. <end snip> Now you point out that the body of the text says “[RFC5305]” whereas the appendix says “TLV 134”. Fine – I can make them consistent. Now, can you respond to my comment regarding the lack of clarity in using quotes? Thanx. Les From: Alvaro Retana <aretana.i...@gmail.com> Sent: Wednesday, March 03, 2021 1:09 PM To: Les Ginsberg (ginsberg) <ginsb...@cisco.com>; Dhruv Dhody <dhruv.i...@gmail.com>; Christian Hopps <cho...@chopps.org> Cc: TEAS WG Chairs <teas-cha...@ietf.org>; lsr-...@ietf.org; teas-...@ietf.org; lsr-cha...@ietf.org; lsr@ietf.org; TEAS WG (t...@ietf.org) <t...@ietf.org> Subject: RE: [Lsr] [Teas] WG Last Call for draft-ietf-lsr-isis-rfc5316bis Les: The text is not the same: §3.1 reads: "The Router ID SHOULD be identical to the value advertised in the Traffic Engineering Router ID TLV [RFC5305].” I’m sure you’ll do the right thing. Thanks! Alvaro. On March 3, 2021 at 3:54:42 PM, Les Ginsberg (ginsberg) (ginsb...@cisco.com<mailto:ginsb...@cisco.com>) wrote: > OLD> > 1. The Router ID SHOULD be identical to the value advertised in the > Traffic Engineering Router ID TLV (134) if available. > > NEW> > 1. The "Router ID SHOULD be identical" to the value advertised in the > Traffic Engineering Router ID TLV (134) if available (Section 3.1). > [Les:] So I am willing to make the change. But I have to say that for me as a reader the use of quotes as you suggest does not aid clarity. I have no idea why the entire sentence should not be quoted as without the unquoted portion of the sentence the meaning of the quoted part is incomplete.
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