Reviewer: Matthew Bocci Review result: Ready The draft is basically ready. I found the it easy to read and well written. Thank you!
I have a few minor nits, intended to improve readability, as follows: Section 2.2: "..to a bunch of routers R1 thru RN..." I suggest changing 'thru' to 'through', to be consistent with the rest of the draft. "...towards the core getting diverted away..." I suggest changing this to "...towards the core to be diverted away..." Section 4 LLS Reverse Metric TLV Please expand 'LLS' on first use. Section 6 Procedures, first bullet "..by any of its neighbor on any of its links..." I suggest changing to "..by any of its neighbors on any of its links..." _______________________________________________ Lsr mailing list Lsr@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/lsr
