Hi Matthew, Thanks for your review and we've fixed all the nits identified by you in the updated version posted below:
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-lsr-ospf-reverse-metric-05 Thanks, Ketan On Wed, Apr 27, 2022 at 9:15 PM Matthew Bocci via Datatracker < nore...@ietf.org> wrote: > Reviewer: Matthew Bocci > Review result: Ready > > The draft is basically ready. I found the it easy to read and well written. > Thank you! > > I have a few minor nits, intended to improve readability, as follows: > > Section 2.2: > "..to a bunch of routers R1 thru RN..." I suggest changing 'thru' to > 'through', > to be consistent with the rest of the draft. "...towards the core getting > diverted away..." I suggest changing this to "...towards the core to be > diverted away..." > > Section 4 LLS Reverse Metric TLV > Please expand 'LLS' on first use. > > Section 6 Procedures, first bullet > "..by any of its neighbor on any of its links..." I suggest changing to > "..by > any of its neighbors on any of its links..." > > > >
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