Hi Ketan Thank you. Looks good to me.
Matthew From: Ketan Talaulikar <ketant.i...@gmail.com> Date: Thursday, 28 April 2022 at 15:48 To: "Bocci, Matthew (Nokia - GB)" <matthew.bo...@nokia.com> Cc: "rtg-...@ietf.org" <rtg-...@ietf.org>, "draft-ietf-lsr-ospf-reverse-metric....@ietf.org" <draft-ietf-lsr-ospf-reverse-metric....@ietf.org>, "last-c...@ietf.org" <last-c...@ietf.org>, lsr <lsr@ietf.org> Subject: Re: Rtgdir last call review of draft-ietf-lsr-ospf-reverse-metric-04 Hi Matthew, Thanks for your review and we've fixed all the nits identified by you in the updated version posted below: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-lsr-ospf-reverse-metric-05 Thanks, Ketan On Wed, Apr 27, 2022 at 9:15 PM Matthew Bocci via Datatracker <nore...@ietf.org<mailto:nore...@ietf.org>> wrote: Reviewer: Matthew Bocci Review result: Ready The draft is basically ready. I found the it easy to read and well written. Thank you! I have a few minor nits, intended to improve readability, as follows: Section 2.2: "..to a bunch of routers R1 thru RN..." I suggest changing 'thru' to 'through', to be consistent with the rest of the draft. "...towards the core getting diverted away..." I suggest changing this to "...towards the core to be diverted away..." Section 4 LLS Reverse Metric TLV Please expand 'LLS' on first use. Section 6 Procedures, first bullet "..by any of its neighbor on any of its links..." I suggest changing to "..by any of its neighbors on any of its links..."
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