Le 2012-11-19 16:15, Marc Paré a écrit :
Le 2012-11-19 14:05, dhiren jani a écrit :
One of our mailing-list team members will then
respond and try to address the details of your inquiry.
"mailing team subscriber"? Not sure here.
Perhaps you could even drop this sentence.

Rest looks good.

regards
Dhiren


How about:

A member of our mailing list team will then respond and try to address
the details of your inquiry.

Cheers,

Marc




Actually, maybe better and simpler to say:

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A member of our mailing list will then respond and try to address the details of your inquiry.

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We should try to leave the OP feeling that there will ultimately be a response to his question, and, not be ignored. This will also force us to commit to a response. BTW ... we usually respond to queries and it would be unusual for us to ignore them.

Cheers,

Marc

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