Hi :) Errr the bullet-points issue is fairly minor if no-one else is noticing what i mean. It's a bit like kerning. Sometimes it's too trivial to be worth fixing but sometimes it's really horrible. In this case the bullet-point indent looks fine as it is. It might be a minor improvement but it's honestly not worth spending too much time on. Apols and regards from Tom :)
>________________________________ > From: Marc Paré <m...@marcpare.com> >To: marketing@global.libreoffice.org >Sent: Saturday, 11 May 2013, 20:07 >Subject: [libreoffice-marketing] Re: Brochure-type: General Information > > >Le 10/05/13 11:08 PM, Jean Weber a écrit : >> On Sat, May 11, 2013 at 11:06 AM, Jean Weber <jeanwe...@gmail.com> wrote: >>> Apologies for not having got to the brochure earlier. Comments: >>> * It would look a lot better if automatic hyphenation were turned off. >>> If some hyphenation is essential to make all the text fit in the space >>> available, use conditional hyphenation. >>> * There are some between-word spacing errors in the A4 version >>> that are obviously caused by many extra spaces having been added >>> (probably at the ends of lines in the USLtr version. >>> These extra spaces need to be removed. >>> * I have a LOT of suggestions for improvements in wording as well as a >>> few punctuation corrections. I think the easiest way to handle this is >>> for me to edit the file and create my version for everyone's consideration. >>> I'll do that and upload to the wiki and post the links here. >>> >>> --Jean >> >> Files here: >> >> ODT >> https://wiki.documentfoundation.org/File:LibreOfficeV.4.0.x-CommunityBrochure-GeneralInformation-A4_JHW.odt >> https://wiki.documentfoundation.org/File:LibreOfficeV.4.0.x-CommunityBrochure-GeneralInformation-USLtr_JHW.odt >> >> PDF >> https://wiki.documentfoundation.org/File:LibreOfficeV.4.0.x-CommunityBrochure-GeneralInformation-A4_JHW.pdf >> https://wiki.documentfoundation.org/File:LibreOfficeV.4.0.x-CommunityBrochure-GeneralInformation-USLtr_JHW.pdf >> >> Apologies for lack of change tracking. >> >> --Jean >> > >Thanks! Looks great. > >* When you say "conditional hyphenation", where is the option switch for >it, I can't seem to find it in "Options". > >==================== > >Could we also take a look at the following links (ignore the hyphenation >problem)? > >We are trying to address Tom's complaint of p.2 panels 1 and 2. > >One of the corrections to the brochure that we could make is move the >complete bulleted list started on panel 1 and move it to panel 2 ... and >move the text from panel 2 --> panel 1. > >Just switching the text may address the spacing problem he mentions. >Note that we should also consider the flow of information and see if >moving the text has any impact on the "understandability" of the brochure. > >So, we may want to compare the versions of: > >https://wiki.documentfoundation.org/File:LibreOfficeV.4.0.x-CommunityBrochure-GeneralInformation-USLtr_JHW.odt > >USLtr_JHW version > >with the posted demonstration version of: > >http://www.parentreprise.com/images/LibreOffice/JuggledColumnsBrochurev4.0GeneralInformation.odt > >Should we adopt the moved text version? > >Cheers, > >Marc > > > >-- >Marc Paré >m...@marcpare.com >http://www.parEntreprise.com >parEntreprise.com Supports OpenDocument Formats (ODF) >parEntreprise.com Supports http://www.LibreOffice.org > > >-- >To unsubscribe e-mail to: marketing+unsubscr...@global.libreoffice.org >Problems? http://www.libreoffice.org/get-help/mailing-lists/how-to-unsubscribe/ >Posting guidelines + more: http://wiki.documentfoundation.org/Netiquette >List archive: http://listarchives.libreoffice.org/global/marketing/ >All messages sent to this list will be publicly archived and cannot be deleted > > > -- To unsubscribe e-mail to: marketing+unsubscr...@global.libreoffice.org Problems? http://www.libreoffice.org/get-help/mailing-lists/how-to-unsubscribe/ Posting guidelines + more: http://wiki.documentfoundation.org/Netiquette List archive: http://listarchives.libreoffice.org/global/marketing/ All messages sent to this list will be publicly archived and cannot be deleted
