On Tue, Dec 11, 2012 at 12:53 PM, Sivan Greenberg <si...@omniqueue.com> wrote:
> Here is my suggested introductory text:
>
> "NemoMobile - Future of mobile is in our hands - today.
>
> NemoMobile is the first feature rich, out of the box usable pure open source
> mobile operating system, based on the Mer lean core. Gadget freak,
> techno-savvy, or just curious where ubiquitous computing can take us, you've
> come to the right place.
>
> Become a user and enjoy. Make it prepare your coffee and then contribute.
> Use it on your mobile phone, tablet or custom built embedded platform and
> tell us how it went! The more users, the merrier. The more feedback the
> better.
>
> And the best part of it? It is pure fun, and we're one of the friendliest
> open source communities you've ever met. Excited? So are we -- now join us
> on #nemomobile@freenode or leave a comment on this $SOCIAL_NETWORK page and
> lets influence the future of mobile, together.
> "
>
> I think the slogan is quite good, what does the list think? (could we (tm)
> it for the use of the open source project nemombile btw? )
>
> Anxiously awaiting your feedback.
>
> -Sivan

Good. I like the slogan. The text that follows could use review and
some editing. For example:
> NemoMobile is the first feature rich, out of the box usable pure open source
> mobile operating system, based on the Mer lean core.

Sounds cluttered, breathless.

NemoMobile is the mobile operating system based on the Mer lean core
Linux. Feature rich. Out of the box usable. Pure open source. First OS
like it.

>Gadget freak, techno-savvy, or just curious where ubiquitous computing can 
>take us, you've come to the right place.

Gadget freak, tech savvy or just curious, you've come to the right
place. See where ubiquitous computing can take us.

Carl

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> On Tue, Dec 11, 2012 at 10:35 PM, Sivan Greenberg <si...@omniqueue.com>
> wrote:
>>
>> HI all, again.
>>
>>  Do we have a winner for the logo?
>> http://polldaddy.com/poll/6679035/?view=results&msg=voted says we do, can we
>> go on choose that one and move forward ? I'll create the intro text soon and
>> send it here for review.
>>
>>  What else are we missing?
>>
>> -Sivan
>>
>>
>> On Sun, Nov 11, 2012 at 10:06 PM, Filip Kłębczyk <fklebc...@gmail.com>
>> wrote:
>>>
>>>
>>> Wiadomość napisana przez Simonas Leleiva <simonas.lele...@gmail.com> w
>>> dniu 10 lis 2012, o godz. 01:20:
>>>
>>> > Also added couple of more with the sail
>>> > http://play.qwazix.com/grog/?p=245 - especially the one very nice also 
>>> > where
>>> > sail's reflection is a shape of the boat!
>>>
>>> In my opinion:
>>> 1. The light ones are much better than those dark ones (font is for sure
>>> too dark, which affects readability), but I would have doubts if the logo is
>>> not too complicated for a logo (although it looks really nice from graphical
>>> point of view).
>>> 2. The one with the fish is simpler and better, but the fish looks a bit
>>> like evil fish, especially with that yellow scary eye (I think tonight I
>>> will go to sleep leaving the lights turned on after seeing that fish ;-))
>>>
>>> In general logotypes should be simple - that also saves money when
>>> producing t-shirts, cups or other things with the logo.
>>>
>>> Best regards,
>>> Filip
>>>
>>
>>
>>
>> --
>> -Sivan
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> --
> -Sivan


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