Yep, that's good IMO. I've actually been reading it some more and spotted a few more things worth commenting. Most of them are just small misses (probably due to earlier changes).
metalink:verification (4.1.5) It may contain exactly one metalink:signature element. This has probably changed at some point, because there's no ? after metalinkSignature and above the bullet list the text says that some of these elements are required (but none are). "elements" could be in singular too (after "...contain exactly one metalink:signature"). metalink:resources (4.1.4) metalink:metadata could also be added to the schema and introducing paragraph here. That's all for now. Have a great 2009 everyone! Anthony Bryan wrote: > thanks for the review! you caught some good things! > > I changed it to: > > o metalink:resources element MUST contain at least one metalink: > metadata element or at least one metalink:url element. Typically, > metalink:resources element contains more than one metalink:url > element to provide multiple download sources. > > is that ok, or is there a better way to word it? > > On Fri, Jan 9, 2009 at 2:57 PM, Hampus Wessman <[email protected]> > wrote: > >> I just read the current draft and I must say that it's really good!! >> It's very clear and I like the new standard too. It shows that the >> metalink format has been around for some time. Lots of improvements! >> >> Just a few comments on small things: >> >> Somewhere it says: >> metalink:metalink elements MAY contain exactly one metalink:origin >> element. If metalink:type is "dynamic", metalink:metalink >> elements MAY contain exactly one metalink:origin element. >> Looks like an unnecessary repetition. The same for metalink:updated a >> few lines down. >> >> metalink:resources element MUST contain at least one metalink:url >> element, but couldn't it be useful with a metalink that only contains >> metalink:metadata tags (and no urls)? >> >> Great work! >> Hampus Wessman >> >> >> Anthony Bryan wrote: >> >>> http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-bryan-metalink-04.txt >>> >>> A new version of I-D, draft-bryan-metalink-04.txt has been successfuly >>> submitted by Anthony Bryan and posted to the IETF repository. >>> >>> Filename: draft-bryan-metalink >>> Revision: 04 >>> Title: The Metalink Download Description Format >>> Creation_date: 2008-12-31 >>> WG ID: Independent Submission >>> Number_of_pages: 36 >>> >>> Abstract: >>> This document specifies Metalink Documents, an XML-based download >>> description format. >>> >>> >>> >> > > > > --~--~---------~--~----~------------~-------~--~----~ You received this message because you are subscribed to the Google Groups "Metalink Discussion" group. To post to this group, send email to [email protected] To unsubscribe from this group, send email to [email protected] For more options, visit this group at http://groups.google.com/group/metalink-discussion?hl=en -~----------~----~----~----~------~----~------~--~---
