On Thu, Mar 24, 2011 at 03:32:38PM +0100, David Vasek wrote:
> On Thu, 24 Mar 2011, Glen Anderson wrote:
> 
> >A small change to the interactive commands section to make the
> >description of the 1 command more accurate.
> >
> >$ diff -u top.1 top.1.new
> >--- top.1       Thu Mar 24 12:39:45 2011
> >+++ top.1.new   Thu Mar 24 13:10:45 2011
> >@@ -282,7 +282,7 @@
> >.Sq P
> >interactive command.
> >.It 1
> >-Display CPU statistics on a single line instead of a line per CPU.
> >+Toggle between a single line of CPU statistics and one line per CPU.
> >.It C
> >Toggle the display of process command line arguments.
> >.It d Ar count
> 
> Accidentaly, I have been playing with top(1) yesterday and today too. What 
> would you think about pointing out that in the first mentioned case the 
> statistics are cumulative?
> 
> Regards,
> David
> 
> 
> $ diff -u top.1 top.1.new
> --- top.1       Thu Mar 24 12:39:45 2011
> +++ top.1.new   Thu Mar 24 13:10:45 2011
> @@ -282,7 +282,7 @@
> .Sq P
> interactive command.
> .It 1
> -Display CPU statistics on a single line instead of a line per CPU.
> +Toggle between a single line of cumulative CPU statistics and one line per 
> CPU.
> .It C
> Toggle the display of process command line arguments.
> .It d Ar count
> 

i think this is better:

Index: top.1
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/src/usr.bin/top/top.1,v
retrieving revision 1.57
diff -u -r1.57 top.1
--- top.1       10 Aug 2010 20:34:16 -0000      1.57
+++ top.1       24 Mar 2011 15:49:01 -0000
@@ -75,7 +75,7 @@
 The options are as follows:
 .Bl -tag -width Ds
 .It Fl 1
-Display CPU statistics on a single line instead of a line per CPU.
+Display CPU statistics on a single line instead of one line per CPU.
 .It Fl b
 Use
 .Em batch
@@ -282,7 +282,8 @@
 .Sq P
 interactive command.
 .It 1
-Display CPU statistics on a single line instead of a line per CPU.
+Toggle CPU statistics between a single line for all processors
+and one line per CPU.
 .It C
 Toggle the display of process command line arguments.
 .It d Ar count

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