Hi Med, Searching for the word “long” and also the word “line”, I’m unable to find any instances of the concern I raised in -21. As you suggest, the text must’ve been removed when resolving Lou’s comment. No further action needed.
Thanks, Kent > On Nov 14, 2024, at 2:56 AM, [email protected] wrote: > > Hi all, > > This version implements the changes discussed in Dublin, especially to > address the comments about long trees (Lou) and better organize the > commentary text in the sec template (Rob). > > Kent, it seems that you had a comment about clarifying "long lines" (?) but I > fail to see which part you were referring to, especially that there are no > occurrences of "lines" or "long line" in -21. May be this was related to some > of the text removed to address the comment from Lou? > > Unless Kent still think a new rev is needed (and assuming he provides text > :-)), I think this version is ready to be sent to the IESG. > > Thank you. > > Cheers, > Med > >> -----Message d'origine----- >> De : [email protected] <[email protected]> >> Envoyé : jeudi 14 novembre 2024 08:43 >> À : [email protected] >> Cc : [email protected] >> Objet : I-D Action: draft-ietf-netmod-rfc8407bis-21.txt >> >> >> Internet-Draft draft-ietf-netmod-rfc8407bis-21.txt is now >> available. 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