Hi Med (and Rob Wilton), The current document contains new text proposed by Rob Wilton (in his PR):
-- If the data model contains any particularly sensitive readable -- data nodes, e.g., ones that might be protected by a -- "nacm:default-deny-read" or a "nacm:default-deny-all" extensions -- statement, or if they may reveal sensitive customer information -- or violate personal privacy laws, such as those of the Euopean -- Union, if exposed to unauthorized parties, then those subtrees -- and data nodes must be listed here, along with an explanation of -- the associated sensitivity, security, or privacy concerns. Lou and I are concerned about the text: … or if they may reveal sensitive customer information -- or violate personal privacy laws, such as those of the Euopean -- Union, if exposed to unauthorized parties, The reason being is that it gets into Legal interpretations. We think that this text can be struck, leaving it to the simpler statement "any particularly sensitive readable data nodes”. Rob, do you have any objections? Kent and Lou > On Nov 14, 2024, at 2:56 AM, [email protected] wrote: > > Hi all, > > This version implements the changes discussed in Dublin, especially to > address the comments about long trees (Lou) and better organize the > commentary text in the sec template (Rob). > > Kent, it seems that you had a comment about clarifying "long lines" (?) but I > fail to see which part you were referring to, especially that there are no > occurrences of "lines" or "long line" in -21. May be this was related to some > of the text removed to address the comment from Lou? > > Unless Kent still think a new rev is needed (and assuming he provides text > :-)), I think this version is ready to be sent to the IESG. > > Thank you. > > Cheers, > Med > >> -----Message d'origine----- >> De : [email protected] <[email protected]> >> Envoyé : jeudi 14 novembre 2024 08:43 >> À : [email protected] >> Cc : [email protected] >> Objet : I-D Action: draft-ietf-netmod-rfc8407bis-21.txt >> >> >> Internet-Draft draft-ietf-netmod-rfc8407bis-21.txt is now >> available. 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