Hi Med, ID-NITs reports:
Summary: 1 error (**), 0 flaws (~~), 2 warnings (==), 5 comments (—). The error must be fixed. Please looks at the rest as well. Hi Qiufang (as Shepherd) Can you update the write-up question #14 to reflect the fix when it comes out? Kent and Lou > On Jan 14, 2025, at 11:53 AM, [email protected] wrote: > > Hi all, > > Given a comment raised by Kent, updated the commentary text in the sec > template to avoid citing a specific regional law + split a long sentence. > This revision also update the RPC part to also cite action per a comment > received from Rob. > > Hope this version is ready to be handed to the IESG. > > Cheers, > Med > >> -----Message d'origine----- >> De : [email protected] <[email protected]> >> Envoyé : mardi 14 janvier 2025 17:35 >> À : [email protected] >> Cc : [email protected] >> Objet : [netmod] I-D Action: draft-ietf-netmod-rfc8407bis-22.txt >> >> >> Internet-Draft draft-ietf-netmod-rfc8407bis-22.txt is now >> available. 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