Hi, Kent,
I raised the similar comment in the shepherd review, Med enlightened me that it is not an error to have a normative reference to RFC 8792, as it is listed in the Downref registry (https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/downref). Perhaps I should update the write-up to reflect this explicitly (I will do that). Other warnings/comments are either innocuous or intentional, But I will let Med to reconfirm this as well. Best Regards, Qiufang From: Kent Watsen [mailto:[email protected]] Sent: Tuesday, January 21, 2025 7:00 AM To: Med Boucadair <[email protected]>; maqiufang (A) <[email protected]> Cc: [email protected] Subject: Re: [netmod] I-D Action: draft-ietf-netmod-rfc8407bis-22.txt Hi Med, ID-NITs reports: Summary: 1 error (**), 0 flaws (~~), 2 warnings (==), 5 comments (—). The error must be fixed. Please looks at the rest as well. Hi Qiufang (as Shepherd) Can you update the write-up question #14 to reflect the fix when it comes out? Kent and Lou On Jan 14, 2025, at 11:53 AM, [email protected]<mailto:[email protected]> wrote: Hi all, Given a comment raised by Kent, updated the commentary text in the sec template to avoid citing a specific regional law + split a long sentence. This revision also update the RPC part to also cite action per a comment received from Rob. Hope this version is ready to be handed to the IESG. Cheers, Med -----Message d'origine----- De : [email protected]<mailto:[email protected]> <[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>> Envoyé : mardi 14 janvier 2025 17:35 À : [email protected]<mailto:[email protected]> Cc : [email protected]<mailto:[email protected]> Objet : [netmod] I-D Action: draft-ietf-netmod-rfc8407bis-22.txt Internet-Draft draft-ietf-netmod-rfc8407bis-22.txt is now available. It is a work item of the Network Modeling (NETMOD) WG of the IETF. 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