Roman Danyliw has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-netmod-acl-extensions-15: Discuss
When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/statements/handling-ballot-positions/ for more information about how to handle DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-netmod-acl-extensions/ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- DISCUSS: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- The XSLT of Appendix A.1, A.2 and A.3 imports “iana-yinx.xsl”: <import href="../../../xslt/iana-yinx.xsl"/> Where does this file come from? The XSLT does not compile without it. ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- Thank you to Russ Housley for the GENART review. ** Section 6.3.1 "enum": Replicates the name from the registry with all spaces striped. How should the text in the parentheses be handled (e.g., “Information Request (Deprecated)”)? Appendix A.2 seems to indicate that the content in the parenthesis should be stripped. Perhaps additional text could be added here that this column is formatted according to the XSLT in Appendix A.1. This feedback applies to Sections 6.3.2 and 6.3.3 too. ** Section 6.3.1 "status": Is included only if a registration has been deprecated or obsoleted. IANA "deprecated" maps to YANG status "deprecated", and IANA "obsolete" maps to YANG status "obsolete". ... IANA is requested to add this note to "ICMP Type Numbers" [IANA-ICMPv4]: ... [IANA-ICMPv4] "ICMP Type Numbers", n.d., <https://www.iana.org/assignments/icmp-parameters/icmp- parameters.xhtml>. -- This reference should be normative since it is part of the IANA guidance -- Shouldn’t the link to “ICMP Type Numbers” be https://www.iana.org/assignments/icmp-parameters/icmp-parameters.xhtml#icmp-parameters-types -- How does one know an entry is “obsolete” or “deprecated”? Is it by looking for those strings in the name field? There are a few that are “deprecated” but not “obsolete” The same feedback applies to Section 6.3.2 and 6.3.3? _______________________________________________ netmod mailing list -- [email protected] To unsubscribe send an email to [email protected]
