Hi Med!

I missed the crucial sentence in Section 1 where the different parts of the 
document were explained and the text stated "The templates use an XSLT 
stylesheet    from the 'iana-yang' project [YANG-XSLT]."  Thanks for explaining.

-- If using "iana-yang" code is required to regularly regenerate the YANG 
modules, how can this code be an informative reference?

-- Assuming it was a normative reference, is it a stable reference?  Should a 
particular version of the code be required?  When github reference were 
recently used, we tried reference specific commits?

Now in the territory of code style:
-- why is it mandatory for the normative script to be nested three 
sub-directories back?  "<import href="../../../xslt/iana-yinx.xsl"/>"?

Roman

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Hi Roman, all,

A new version with changes to address your review can be seen at 
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-netmod-acl-extensions/16/. The 
changes also integrates comments from Erik, Mike, Éric, and Deb.

The text is updated to indicate that illegal characters are stripped (non only 
space and parentheses) + move the IANA registries to the normative section 
(also raised by Éric).

Cheers,
Med

> -----Message d'origine-----
> De : BOUCADAIR Mohamed INNOV/NET
> Envoyé : lundi 31 mars 2025 16:43
> À : 'Per Andersson' <[email protected]>; Roman Danyliw <[email protected]> 
> Cc : The IESG <[email protected]>; draft-ietf-netmod-acl- 
> [email protected]; [email protected]; [email protected] Objet : 
> RE: [netmod] Roman Danyliw's Discuss on draft-ietf-netmod-
> acl-extensions-15: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)
>
> Re-,
>
> Exactly what Per said.
>
> It is indicated in the text:
>
> * Introduction:
>
> The templates use an XSLT stylesheet
>    from the 'iana-yang' project [YANG-XSLT].  Readers should refer to
>    the IANA websites [IANA_ICMPv4_YANG_URL], [IANA_ICMPv6_YANG_URL], 
> and
>    [IANA_IPV6_YANG_URL] to retrieve the latest version of these
> IANA-
>    maintained modules.
>
> * Ack section:
>
>    The IANA-maintained modules were generated using an XSLT stylesheet
>    from the 'iana-yang' project [YANG-XSLT]
>
>    [YANG-XSLT]
>               "iana-yang", n.d., <https://github.com/llhotka/iana-
> yang>.
>
>
> Or direct link: https://github.com/llhotka/iana- 
> yang/blob/main/xslt/iana-yinx.xsl
>
> All the generated modules have the following included:
>
>         This version of this YANG module was generated from the
>         corresponding IANA registry using an XSLT stylesheet from the
>         'iana-yang' project (https://github.com/llhotka/iana- yang).";
>
> Cheers,
> Med
>
> > -----Message d'origine-----
> > De : Per Andersson <[email protected]> Envoyé : lundi 31 mars
> 2025
> > 16:37 À : Roman Danyliw <[email protected]> Cc : The IESG
> <[email protected]>;
> > draft-ietf-netmod-acl- [email protected]; netmod-
> [email protected];
> > [email protected] Objet : Re: [netmod] Roman Danyliw's Discuss on
> > draft-ietf-netmod-
> > acl-extensions-15: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)
> >
> > On Mon, Mar 31, 2025 at 1:49 PM Roman Danyliw via Datatracker 
> > <[email protected]> wrote:
> > >
> > > Roman Danyliw has entered the following ballot position for
> > > draft-ietf-netmod-acl-extensions-15: Discuss
> > >
> > > When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply
> > to all
> > > email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to
> > cut
> > > this introductory paragraph, however.)
> > >
> > >
> > >
> > > --------------------------------------------------------------
> --
> > > DISCUSS:
> > > --------------------------------------------------------------
> --
> > >
> > > The XSLT of Appendix A.1, A.2 and A.3 imports “iana-yinx.xsl”:
> > >
> > >      <import href="../../../xslt/iana-yinx.xsl"/>
> > >
> > > Where does this file come from?  The XSLT does not compile
> > without it.
> >
> > I found out myself that it is from
> >
> https://eur03.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2F
> > github.com%2Fllhotka%2Fiana-
> >
> yang&data=05%7C02%7Cmohamed.boucadair%40orange.com%7C3d1860b35e994
> >
> b4a63c408dd70617f77%7C90c7a20af34b40bfbc48b9253b6f5d20%7C0%7C0%7C6
> >
> 38790286222595583%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnRydWUs
> >
> IlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3D%
> >
> 3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=tzdW%2FTFhdlDPQhue8gtoyMup9B8%2FLMpSZOIeHjXM
> > VOc%3D&reserved=0 .
> >
> > It was mentioned in two sections when I reviewed, but I managed
> to
> > miss it. I requested for it to be added more up front in the
> draft,
> > which it has been.
> >
> >
> > --
> > Per

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