Deb Cooley has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-netmod-acl-extensions-15: No Objection
When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/statements/handling-ballot-positions/ for more information about how to handle DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-netmod-acl-extensions/ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- Thank you to Sean Turner and Linda Dunbar for their secdir reviews: Section 5, para 2: Please replace the second (and last sentence) with "The YANG-based management protocols require the use of a secure transport layer such as SSH [RFC4252], TLS [RFC8446], or QUIC [RFC9000]. The YANG-based management protocols also require mutual authentication." Section 5, para 4: Please define 'reasonably sensitive or vulnerable' and 'particular sensitivities/vulnerabilities. Alternatively, delete the words 'reasonably' and 'particular'. Section 5, para 5: Perhaps the second to last sentence should say 'The former may result in the exposure of sensitive data, or compromise a device. Section 5, para 7: Please delete the word 'particular'. _______________________________________________ netmod mailing list -- [email protected] To unsubscribe send an email to [email protected]
