Hi Roman, Can you confirm if the -17 version of the document addresses your DISCUSS and COMMENT?
Thanks. > On Apr 3, 2025, at 9:39 PM, [email protected] wrote: > > Hi Roman, > > As a follow-up, I updated the spec to remove the XSLT. The IANA is supplied > with the initial version of the module + instructions to maintain it. That’s > what is authoritative. > > The changes can be seen at: > https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url2=draft-ietf-netmod-acl-extensions-17 > > This is consistent with the approach followed so far for defining for IANA > modules, with the rare exceptions of RFC 9108 and Kent's python script in > rfc9644#name-script-to-generate-iana-mai. > > Let me know if you still have any comment. Thanks. > > Cheers, > Med > >> -----Message d'origine----- >> De : BOUCADAIR Mohamed INNOV/NET >> Envoyé : jeudi 3 avril 2025 15:44 >> À : 'Roman Danyliw' <[email protected]>; Per Andersson >> <[email protected]> >> Cc : The IESG <[email protected]>; draft-ietf-netmod-acl- >> [email protected]; [email protected]; [email protected] >> Objet : RE: [netmod] Roman Danyliw's Discuss on draft-ietf-netmod- >> acl-extensions-15: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT) >> >> Hi Roman, >> >> What is normative are the instruction and guidance in the IANA >> section. The code is just an implementation of these guidance. >> This is why we are not listing it as normative. >> >> I was told that IANA maintains this manually even if we supply the >> code. Given that we also supply the initial version, I though that >> we don't need to actually rely on YANG-XSLT, and leave it to IANA >> to adhere to the guidance. >> >> For the "style" question, this to reflect the folder organization >> in Lada's repo. That structure may be avoided but we just used the >> one available out there. >> >> Cheers, >> Med >> >>> -----Message d'origine----- >>> De : Roman Danyliw <[email protected]> >>> Envoyé : jeudi 3 avril 2025 15:25 >>> À : BOUCADAIR Mohamed INNOV/NET <[email protected]>; >> Per >>> Andersson <[email protected]> Cc : The IESG <[email protected]>; >>> draft-ietf-netmod-acl- [email protected]; netmod- >> [email protected]; >>> [email protected] Objet : RE: [netmod] Roman Danyliw's Discuss on >>> draft-ietf-netmod- >>> acl-extensions-15: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT) >>> >>> >>> Hi Med! >>> >>> I missed the crucial sentence in Section 1 where the different >> parts >>> of the document were explained and the text stated "The >>> templates use an XSLT stylesheet from the 'iana-yang' project >>> [YANG-XSLT]." Thanks for explaining. >>> >>> -- If using "iana-yang" code is required to regularly regenerate >> the >>> YANG modules, how can this code be an informative reference? >>> >>> -- Assuming it was a normative reference, is it a stable >> reference? >>> Should a particular version of the code be required? >>> When github reference were recently used, we tried reference >> specific >>> commits? >>> >>> Now in the territory of code style: >>> -- why is it mandatory for the normative script to be nested >> three >>> sub-directories back? "<import href="../../../xslt/iana- >>> yinx.xsl"/>"? >>> >>> Roman >>> >>> -----Original Message----- >>> From: [email protected] >> <[email protected]> >>> Sent: Wednesday, April 2, 2025 2:01 AM >>> To: Per Andersson <[email protected]>; Roman Danyliw >> <[email protected]> >>> Cc: The IESG <[email protected]>; draft-ietf-netmod-acl- >>> [email protected]; [email protected]; [email protected] >>> Subject: RE: [netmod] Roman Danyliw's Discuss on draft-ietf- >>> netmod-acl-extensions-15: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT) >>> >>> Warning: External Sender - do not click links or open >> attachments >>> unless you recognize the sender and know the content is safe. >>> >>> >>> Hi Roman, all, >>> >>> A new version with changes to address your review can be seen at >>> >> https://eur03.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2F >>> datatracker.ietf.org%2Fdoc%2Fdraft-ietf-netmod-acl- >>> >> extensions%2F16%2F&data=05%7C02%7Cmohamed.boucadair%40orange.com%7 >>> >> Cda2960f406f6483ded0408dd72b30090%7C90c7a20af34b40bfbc48b9253b6f5d >>> >> 20%7C0%7C0%7C638792835317357250%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU >>> >> 1hcGkiOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIs >>> >> IldUIjoyfQ%3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=QX1gsazM7ZAutwrVzergfXBsUhvUlQ >>> MYzI5BIZiYlHQ%3D&reserved=0. The changes also integrates >> comments from >>> Erik, Mike, Éric, and Deb. >>> >>> The text is updated to indicate that illegal characters are >> stripped >>> (non only space and parentheses) + move the IANA registries to >> the >>> normative section (also raised by Éric). >>> >>> Cheers, >>> Med >>> >>>> -----Message d'origine----- >>>> De : BOUCADAIR Mohamed INNOV/NET >>>> Envoyé : lundi 31 mars 2025 16:43 >>>> À : 'Per Andersson' <[email protected]>; Roman Danyliw >>> <[email protected]> >>>> Cc : The IESG <[email protected]>; draft-ietf-netmod-acl- >>>> [email protected]; [email protected]; [email protected] >>> Objet : >>>> RE: [netmod] Roman Danyliw's Discuss on draft-ietf-netmod- >>>> acl-extensions-15: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT) >>>> >>>> Re-, >>>> >>>> Exactly what Per said. >>>> >>>> It is indicated in the text: >>>> >>>> * Introduction: >>>> >>>> The templates use an XSLT stylesheet >>>> from the 'iana-yang' project [YANG-XSLT]. Readers should >>> refer to >>>> the IANA websites [IANA_ICMPv4_YANG_URL], >>> [IANA_ICMPv6_YANG_URL], >>>> and >>>> [IANA_IPV6_YANG_URL] to retrieve the latest version of >> these >>>> IANA- >>>> maintained modules. >>>> >>>> * Ack section: >>>> >>>> The IANA-maintained modules were generated using an XSLT >>> stylesheet >>>> from the 'iana-yang' project [YANG-XSLT] >>>> >>>> [YANG-XSLT] >>>> "iana-yang", n.d., >>>> >>> >> <https://eur03.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2 >>> Fgit >>>> hub.com%2Fllhotka%2Fiana- >>> &data=05%7C02%7Cmohamed.boucadair%40orange.co >>>> >>> >> m%7Cda2960f406f6483ded0408dd72b30090%7C90c7a20af34b40bfbc48b9253b6 >>> f5d2 >>>> >>> >> 0%7C0%7C0%7C638792835317375070%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1 >>> hcGk >>>> >>> >> iOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUI >>> joyf >>>> >>> >> Q%3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=sYpmBuKP%2FmIhD5CQE2kmUUTSPhxS75vykSjlQ >>> OENg >>>> Qk%3D&reserved=0 >>>> yang>. >>>> >>>> >>>> Or direct link: >>>> >>> >> https://eur03.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2F >>> gith >>>> ub.com%2Fllhotka%2Fiana- >>> &data=05%7C02%7Cmohamed.boucadair%40orange.com >>>> >>> >> %7Cda2960f406f6483ded0408dd72b30090%7C90c7a20af34b40bfbc48b9253b6f >>> 5d20 >>>> >>> >> %7C0%7C0%7C638792835317383700%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1h >>> cGki >>>> >>> >> OnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIj >>> oyfQ >>>> >>> >> %3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=jCb1sBi0XdE9MiwZXUhJjHCalyQm1r4QStDU6UrU >>> O%2B >>>> o%3D&reserved=0 >>>> yang/blob/main/xslt/iana-yinx.xsl >>>> >>>> All the generated modules have the following included: >>>> >>>> This version of this YANG module was generated from >> the >>>> corresponding IANA registry using an XSLT stylesheet >>> from the >>>> 'iana-yang' project >>>> >>> >> (https://eur03.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2 >>> Fgit >>>> hub.com%2Fllhotka%2Fiana- >>> &data=05%7C02%7Cmohamed.boucadair%40orange.co >>>> >>> >> m%7Cda2960f406f6483ded0408dd72b30090%7C90c7a20af34b40bfbc48b9253b6 >>> f5d2 >>>> >>> >> 0%7C0%7C0%7C638792835317391712%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1 >>> hcGk >>>> >>> >> iOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUI >>> joyf >>>> >>> >> Q%3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=NTdnvX8eRo56bwYzktBHudg7murnkrO8gLvCoHy >>> %2BM >>>> e4%3D&reserved=0 yang)."; >>>> >>>> Cheers, >>>> Med >>>> >>>>> -----Message d'origine----- >>>>> De : Per Andersson <[email protected]> Envoyé : lundi 31 >> mars >>>> 2025 >>>>> 16:37 À : Roman Danyliw <[email protected]> Cc : The IESG >>>> <[email protected]>; >>>>> draft-ietf-netmod-acl- [email protected]; netmod- >>>> [email protected]; >>>>> [email protected] Objet : Re: [netmod] Roman Danyliw's Discuss >>> on >>>>> draft-ietf-netmod- >>>>> acl-extensions-15: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT) >>>>> >>>>> On Mon, Mar 31, 2025 at 1:49 PM Roman Danyliw via Datatracker >>>>> <[email protected]> wrote: >>>>>> >>>>>> Roman Danyliw has entered the following ballot position >> for >>>>>> draft-ietf-netmod-acl-extensions-15: Discuss >>>>>> >>>>>> When responding, please keep the subject line intact and >>> reply >>>>> to all >>>>>> email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel >> free >>> to >>>>> cut >>>>>> this introductory paragraph, however.) >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> ---------------------------------------------------------- >> -- >>> -- >>>> -- >>>>>> DISCUSS: >>>>>> ---------------------------------------------------------- >> -- >>> -- >>>> -- >>>>>> >>>>>> The XSLT of Appendix A.1, A.2 and A.3 imports “iana- >>> yinx.xsl”: >>>>>> >>>>>> <import href="../../../xslt/iana-yinx.xsl"/> >>>>>> >>>>>> Where does this file come from? The XSLT does not compile >>>>> without it. >>>>> >>>>> I found out myself that it is from >>>>> >>>> >>> >> https://eur03.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2F >>>>> github.com%2Fllhotka%2Fiana- >>>>> >>>> >>> >> yang&data=05%7C02%7Cmohamed.boucadair%40orange.com%7C3d1860b35e994 >>>>> >>>> >>> >> b4a63c408dd70617f77%7C90c7a20af34b40bfbc48b9253b6f5d20%7C0%7C0%7C6 >>>>> >>>> >>> >> 38790286222595583%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnRydWUs >>>>> >>>> >>> >> IlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3D% >>>>> >>>> >>> >> 3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=tzdW%2FTFhdlDPQhue8gtoyMup9B8%2FLMpSZOIeHjXM >>>>> VOc%3D&reserved=0 . >>>>> >>>>> It was mentioned in two sections when I reviewed, but I >>> managed >>>> to >>>>> miss it. 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