On Thu, Apr 30, 2009 at 12:25 AM, Eran Hammer-Lahav <e...@hueniverse.com> wrote:
>
> Please review:
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> http://oauth.googlecode.com/svn/spec/core/1.0a/drafts/1/oauth-core-1_0a.html
>

Nice changes. A few points

* "oob":  Can it be described at first use or renamed to something
that makes immediate sense?
* "non-guessable" is impossible to achieve... perhaps "hard to guess" instead?
* "In order to ensure that the User..." can be simplified to "To make
sure the User...".

Hans

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