On Tue, 23 Aug 2022 11:46:47 GMT, Nir Lisker <nlis...@openjdk.org> wrote:
>> Fixes the mistakes in the JBS ticket and some additional minor corrections.
>
> Nir Lisker has updated the pull request incrementally with one additional
> commit since the last revision:
>
> Addressed review comments
modules/javafx.graphics/src/main/java/javafx/concurrent/Service.java line 104:
> 102: * For example, to write a Service that reads the first line
> 103: * from any URL and returned it as a String, it might be defined
> 104: * such that it had a single property, {@code url}, and might be
> implemented
I like the rewrite, although a couple of the verb tenses are now mismatched:
"returned" --> "returns"
"had" --> "has" (or replace "such that it had" by "with")
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PR: https://git.openjdk.org/jfx/pull/880
