On Sunday 26 September 2010 17:23:01 Carlos Ribeiro wrote:
> Jos,
>
> Yes, we already did piratepad for the obs 2.1 draf for announcement,
> http://piratepad.net/VXa1B1xryD
Hi,
I suggest to explain what obs is right at the beginning of the text - I've
added a bit now but it does not fit in.
Also: The new features you mention are all features from 2.0.
I suggested to add these features in a prominent way:
* enhanced web user interface: creation of submit requests; source history and
showing of commits
* Source services allow checkout from svn/git with tar up, download from
remote sides
* Read access control for package sources.
I would mention also the install methods, the new installation media that
installs OBS on a fresh system directly, the appliances, the public
build.opensuse.org as well as OBS is an Open Source project
I suggest to not use bullet points but instead announce three features and
make a paragraph for each one.
Could you rework this further, please? Feel free to catch me on IRC,
Andreas
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