Am Montag, 27. September 2010, 15:09:33 schrieb Andreas Jaeger: > On Sunday 26 September 2010 17:23:01 Carlos Ribeiro wrote: > > Jos, > > > > Yes, we already did piratepad for the obs 2.1 draf for announcement, > > http://piratepad.net/VXa1B1xryD > > Hi, > > I suggest to explain what obs is right at the beginning of the text - I've > added a bit now but it does not fit in. > > Also: The new features you mention are all features from 2.0. > I suggested to add these features in a prominent way: > > * enhanced web user interface: creation of submit requests; source history > and > showing of commits
This sounds a bit too technical to me. Maybe market this like "wiki like code editing with OBS 2.1" ? We developed also the idea to market OBS as "Gläserne Fabrik", which translates to "Transparent Factory", but direct translation would be actually "Glas-like Factory". While I like the german term very much (it is used by Volkswagen to talk about their factory where everybody can see how his car is produced, so most german technical people know it already) the english translation is less appealing to me. Maybe someone here knows a similar term in english ? bye adrian > * Source services allow checkout from svn/git with tar up, download from > remote sides > * Read access control for package sources. > > I would mention also the install methods, the new installation media that > installs OBS on a fresh system directly, the appliances, the public > build.opensuse.org as well as OBS is an Open Source project > > I suggest to not use bullet points but instead announce three features and > make a paragraph for each one. > > Could you rework this further, please? Feel free to catch me on IRC, > > Andreas > -- Adrian Schroeter SUSE Linux Products GmbH email: adr...@suse.de -- To unsubscribe, e-mail: opensuse-marketing+unsubscr...@opensuse.org For additional commands, e-mail: opensuse-marketing+h...@opensuse.org
