I'm just taking a look now to fix up some of the English. A few edits have introduced 'too much information' which I'm toning down a little bit.
I'll try to make it as polished as possible and will save the revision when I'm done. One idea - in print, the 'four freedoms' would look nice separately in a highlighted box. cheers Helen On Thu, Jan 6, 2011 at 4:20 PM, Kostas Koudaras <warlord...@gmail.com> wrote: > I just read the whole etherpad and I find it complete, I added the > four Freedoms and I really cannot find anything else I could add so > that we'll keep it simple. Take a look on it but my opinion is that > this task is over. I really liked the whole idea and if we make it a > Flier I will definitely will translated at Greek. > Kostas > > > 2011/1/5 Manu Gupta <manugu...@gmail.com>: >> On Wed, 2011-01-05 at 12:45 +0100, Jos Poortvliet wrote: >>> On Monday 03 January 2011 14:18:43 Jos Poortvliet wrote: >>> > On Monday 03 January 2011 12:04:18 jdd wrote: >>> > > Le 03/01/2011 11:51, Helen a écrit : >>> > > > openSUSE might be perfectly useable by people who are computer >>> > > > illiterate, but they aren't our target market. >>> > > >>> > > thats perfectly true, but we can say this to them gently :-). Who >>> > > knows what they will become the some next years :-) >>> > >>> > Sure but we can fix that later on... Writing for complete and utter >>> > computer newbies doesn't seem like a very useful thing to me. Sure, there >>> > are quite a few of them, but I doubt they would end up on the openSUSE >>> > page. And if they did, I doubt they can decide what operating system they >>> > use - such newbies either use a computer at work or school or a place like >>> > that or have a more knowledgable friend who takes care of their computer. >>> > >>> > > jdd >>> >>> Either way, we have created this page: >>> http://ietherpad.com/HGnVPSDjFD >>> >>> points to Helen for most of the writing. This could be a page available on >>> our >>> homepage. Manu, as you're working on that, could you find a spot for this? >> >> Sure >> >> >> -- >> To unsubscribe, e-mail: opensuse-marketing+unsubscr...@opensuse.org >> For additional commands, e-mail: opensuse-marketing+h...@opensuse.org >> >> > > > > -- > http://opensuse.gr > http://amb.opensuse.gr > http://own.opensuse.gr > http://warlordfff.tk > me I am not me > ------- > Time travel is possible, you just need to know the right aliens > -- > To unsubscribe, e-mail: opensuse-marketing+unsubscr...@opensuse.org > For additional commands, e-mail: opensuse-marketing+h...@opensuse.org > > -- To unsubscribe, e-mail: opensuse-marketing+unsubscr...@opensuse.org For additional commands, e-mail: opensuse-marketing+h...@opensuse.org
