Hi Qin,

On Fri, Jan 21, 2022 at 6:05 PM Qin Wu <bill...@huawei.com> wrote:

> Thanks Dhruv for valuable review, see reply inline below.
>
>
>
> *发件人:* OPSAWG [mailto:opsawg-boun...@ietf.org] *代表 *Dhruv Dhody
> *发送时间:* 2022年1月19日 20:40
> *收件人:* Tianran Zhou <zhoutianran=40huawei....@dmarc.ietf.org>
> *抄送:* opsawg@ietf.org; opsawg-cha...@ietf.org
> *主题:* Re: [OPSAWG] WG Adoption Call for draft-dbwb-opsawg-sap-00
>
>
>
> Hi Tianran,
>
> I have read the I-D and I support its adoption.
>
> Few comments -
>
> 1) Figure 1 uses the term "Service Network Models" which is not defined
> and not aligned to RFC 8309.
>
> [Qin Wu]  I think it is referred to network configuration models since it
> sits on top of controller described in figure 3 of RFC8309. But I am not
> sure RFC8309 is better reference  since RFC8309 introducse layered SDN
> architecture and split orchestrator into service orchestrator and network
> orchestrator which intends to align with MEF SLO project.
> I suggest we can align with RFC8969 instead, which use the term “network
> model” and reduce confusion when the number of layers in our targeted
> architecture is different from on described in figure 3 of RFC8309.
>

Dhruv: Works for me!



> 2) Is the attachment-id the key via which the SAP is linked to the
> physical topology? More text on this would be useful.
>
> [Qin Wu] Yes the attachment-id is the key for service-attachment –point
> list which can mapped to the specific port in the physical topology, yes,
> we can make this clear in the update.
>
>
> 3) Consider adding an example (JSON or XML) of how this model would be
> used alongside L3SM.
>
> [Qin Wu] Good suggestion and will add.
>
>
> 4) Can SAP be used for NNI? Some clarification would be nice!
> [Qin Wu] Yes, I think we cover NNI use case, see the text in the
> introduction
>
> “
>
> With the help of
>
>    other data models (e.g., L3SM [RFC8299
> <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/rfc8299>] or L2SM [RFC8466
> <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/rfc8466>]),
>
>    hierarchical control elements could determine the feasibility of an
>
>    end-to-end IP connectivity or L2VPN connectivity and therefore derive
>
>    the sequence of domains and the points of interconnection to use.
>
>
>
> ”
>
> I think the point of interconnection can be exposed attachment point in
> the NNI case.
>
>
>
Dhruv: In that case, what would be the sap-type is not clear to me. Maybe
we need a new type for this and perhaps a figure that also describes this
case.

Thanks!
Dhruv



> Thanks!
> Dhruv
>
>
>
> On Wed, Jan 5, 2022 at 7:42 AM Tianran Zhou <zhoutianran=
> 40huawei....@dmarc.ietf.org> wrote:
>
> Hi WG,
>
>
>
> I assume most of you are back to work.
>
> Hope you had a good holiday.
>
>
>
> As a follow up action after IETF 111, this mail starts a working group
> adoption call for draft-dbwb-opsawg-sap-00.
>
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-dbwb-opsawg-sap/
>
>
>
> This document defines a YANG data model for representing an abstract view
> of the provider network topology containing the points from which its
> services can be attached (e.g., basic connectivity, VPN, network slices).
>
>
>
> Please review and comment.
>
> We will conclude this adoption call after two weeks.
>
>
>
> Cheers,
>
> Tianran
>
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