Hi WG, Charis, I have reviewed this draft. The document is well written. Just see below about some minor issues and comments:
--- COMMENTS --- Section 5.1., paragraph 7: > "group-id" is defined as a string rather than unsigned integer I'm fine if the "group-id" is not limited to a give set of valid characters or patterns. But there is even no limit about the length of a "group-id"? --- Typos and Nits --- Appendix A., paragraph 36: > </byday> > <byday> > <weekday>friday</weekday> > </byday> > <recurrence> typo? <recurrence> -> </recurrence> Appendix A., paragraph 37: > </effective-schedule> > </ace> > <ace> > <name>rule2</name> > <matches> > <ipv6> > <destination-ipv6-network>2001:db8:1234::/64</\ > destination-ipv6-network> > <source-ipv6-network>2001:db8::2:1/64</source-ipv6-\ > network> > </ipv4> typo? </ipv4> -> </ipv6> Appendix A., paragraph 38: > </matches> > <actions> > <forwarding>reject</forwarding> > </actions> > <effective-schedule xmlns="urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:yang:ietf-\ > ucl-acl"> > <period> > <period-start>2026-01-20T08:30:00-08:00</period-start> > <period-end>2026-12-31T18:00:00-08:00</period-end> > </period> > </effective-schedule> > </ace> > </aces> > </aces> nits: should remove the repeated </aces> Best regards, Jensen On Mon, Sep 29, 2025 at 10:25 PM Joe Clarke (jclarke) <jclarke= [email protected]> wrote: > Hello, WG. We’re extending the WG LC on this by a week until October 6 to > hopefully get a couple of DIR reviews and some more comments from the WG > itself. > > > > Please, take the time to read this and comment on its readiness. > > > > Thanks. > > > > Joe and Benoît > > > > *From: *Joe Clarke (jclarke) <[email protected]> > *Date: *Monday, September 15, 2025 at 09:14 > *To: *opsawg <[email protected]> > *Subject: *WG LC: A YANG Data Model and RADIUS Extension for Policy-based > Network Access Control (draft-ietf-opsawg-ucl-acl) > > Hello, opsawg. With the IPR disclosure done (no known IPR has been > disclosed) and a new -08 revision, we are ready to begin a two week WG LC > for https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-opsawg-ucl-acl/. Please > reply to the list with comments and support for this work being ready to > move forward to the IESG for publication. > > > > The WG LC will run until September 29. > > > > Thanks. > > > > Joe and Benoît > _______________________________________________ > OPSAWG mailing list -- [email protected] > To unsubscribe send an email to [email protected] >
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