Hi Chairs, all,

This draft is well written and it provides a generic mechanism for policy based 
network access control, widely applicable to various enterprise network/campus 
network scenario, allow group to group communication. I believe it can be seen 
as one important SASE solution. A few nits I suggest authors to consider:
1.Section 4.1
OLT TEXT:
"If the authentication request succeeds, the user is placed in a user group the 
identity of which is returned to the network access server as the 
authentication result (see Section 7)."
NEW TEXT :
"If the authentication reguest succeeds, the user is placed in a user group, 
the identity of such user group is returned to the network access server as the 
authentication result (see Section 7)."

2.Section 1
Can you provide a reference for access entitlement? I can understand it means, 
but can not find a good reference.

I support its publication.


Best Regards,
Wenxiang


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From: Joe Clarke (jclarke)
Date: 2025-09-29 22:24
To: opsawg
Subject: [OPSAWG]Re: WG LC: A YANG Data Model and RADIUS Extension for 
Policy-based Network Access Control (draft-ietf-opsawg-ucl-acl)
Hello, WG.  We’re extending the WG LC on this by a week until October 6 to 
hopefully get a couple of DIR reviews and some more comments from the WG itself.
 
Please, take the time to read this and comment on its readiness.
 
Thanks.
 
Joe and Benoît
 
From: Joe Clarke (jclarke) <[email protected]>
Date: Monday, September 15, 2025 at 09:14
To: opsawg <[email protected]>
Subject: WG LC: A YANG Data Model and RADIUS Extension for Policy-based Network 
Access Control (draft-ietf-opsawg-ucl-acl)
Hello, opsawg.  With the IPR disclosure done (no known IPR has been disclosed) 
and a new -08 revision, we are ready to begin a two week WG LC for 
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-opsawg-ucl-acl/.  Please reply to 
the list with comments and support for this work being ready to move forward to 
the IESG for publication.
 
The WG LC will run until September 29.
 
Thanks.
 
Joe and Benoît
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