>1) Please remove/update the red warning text in the front to be like how PerfMon and Auto used (not just removing red text). It is very clear from previous version that this is >the first version, don't need to reiterate.
>Namely: >"NOTE: This version of the specification has version 2.0 to indicate that it is an OSLC Core 2.0 compliant specification. This specification is the initial version of an OSLC >Reconciliation specification." done. >2) #Introduction >The term "artifact" and other general terminology really don't help me know what this spec is about. It would be helpful to include some specific samples/examples of how it >might: computers, IT resources, etc I've an example using ComputerSystem in the intro paragraph >3) #Namespaces 1 >Namespaces should be hyperlinked so one can click on it to see the actual vocabulary document. now hyperlinked to the crtv vocab page Thanks ! T Tuan Dang Tivoli OSLC governance, OSLC Reconciliation workgroup lead, Tivoli Common Data Model Internet: [email protected] phone: (919) 224-1242 T/L 687-1242
