Chris, Could you put your critique suggestions up on a web page? Maybe with John Francis' additions? I've printed them out. And I'll keep them, but who knows how long that will last? I mislay papers all the time. And knowing how I handle my email (no real handling), eventually the originals will be lost in my file cabinet (archived email).
I gather you don't want to be "official" and sort an authority or critiquemaster (critimeister :-)) or anything, but I don't think throwing them on a web page would necessarily lay that mantle on you. Anyway, on a web page they could be available for reference for scattered people like myself and others who may come along later, like newbies. Just an idea. Take with salt. Marnie aka Doe
