I attended a masterclass on architecture photography last month, and with that in mind, here are my comments on your picture: Correct the perspective further so that the horizontals are completely parallel. Come back later when the sun brings the structure of the walls of the building to life. The photograph looks a bit grey. The presence of clouds is very important to increase the feeling of perspective, it would help if they are more separated, and not become a grey mass.
I think what you have done given the weather at the time you took the photograph is good, I like the reflections of the walls in the other walls, and the top line of the roof doesn't interfere with anything else, which is good as well. I wonder if you would have been able to get the palm trees completely in the frame, it bothers me a bit that I can only see the upper part of them. I hope I wasn't too hard on you. On Mon, 2004-04-05 at 20:03, Boris Liberman wrote: > Hi! > > I know I am posting a little too often. But then I haven't been > posting PAWs for quite some time before that. > > Anyway - here's Mark Cassino's K 24/2.8 on Leon Altov's ME Super with > some Kodak TMAX 400 loaded in it <g>. > > I have some particular question to the wizards of Land of Pentax: > > You see, I've been told numerous times that this is a very good > picture. Nonetheless, I would like to hear how it can be improved > provided that I don't have wider lens than K 24/2.8... > > Please notice also that I've applied some perspective correction. I've > left a little "falling" effect in, so that IMHO the impression still > would be that one is looking from below on this building... > > So, I'd appreciate suggestions as to how to improve, as I am sure it > could be improved... > > And now the link: > > http://boris.isra-shop.com/local/paw/clal.jpg > > Thanks in advance. > > Boris > -- Frits Wüthrich <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>
