You should have seen the JPEG he sent ... I think the hat is the biggest offender, and in the darkness of morning here, I can see that bringing the face down a bit more might have helped. But there was only so much time I was going to put into it ;-))
Shel > [Original Message] > From: Paul Stenquist > Much better. But it still feels a bit pasty due to filling in > highlights with neutral tone. But you did a good job of saving what's > there. Does Boris have a RAW file? If so, much more highlight detail > can probably be resurrected.