Based on your and Jack's input I did another crop. I played safe and used the rules of third. If you are interested, it is at a thumb below the picture. The remaining problem is that the second bird doesn't stand out of the ground. Not much to do about that I guess.
BTW. My trigger finger is ok. Today I'll give it some real exercise and bring along my image tank ;-) Tim Mostly harmless (just plain Norwegian) Never underestimate the power of stupidity in large crowds (Very freely after Arthur C. Clarke, or some other clever guy) > -----Original Message----- > From: Kenneth Waller [mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED] > Sent: 10. april 2006 16:41 > To: pentax-discuss@pdml.net > Subject: Re: This beach is not big enough for both of us > > Tim, it doesn't look over sharpened to me. > > Compositionally, the location of the lower bird causes the bird to get > lost > in the ground clutter. > The upper bird is a good capture especially back lit as it is. But I'd > loose > some of the background water above the bird. > The cocked shore line is a minor distraction to me. > > 2GB huh, you must have a tired finger! > > Kenneth Waller > > ----- Original Message ----- > From: "Tim Øsleby" <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> > Subject: PESO: This beach is not big enough for both of us > > > > Now, I've made the gapahuk (the camouflage). Spent two hours there > > yesterday. Great fun. Filled two 1Gb cards. > > > > Here is one of the things I experienced > > http://foto.no/cgi-bin/bildegalleri/vis_bilde.cgi?id=229864 > > > > This is over sharpened IMO. It needs some more tweaking I think it is a > > keeper. Post processing was hard, contrasty. It was hard to get the > > details > > out of the shadows. This is the best I can do for now. I still got a lot > > to > > learn. But now I find raw processing fun. I believe that's a good sign > ;-) > > > > What I like about this picture is the sun shining through the feathers, > > and > > off course, the action. > > > > > > Tim > > Mostly harmless (just plain Norwegian) > > > > Never underestimate the power of stupidity in large crowds > > (Very freely after Arthur C. Clarke, or some other clever guy) > > > > >
