> >> http://aguilapaw.posterous.com/ > >> > On May 28, 2011, at 3:19 AM, Chris Mitchell wrote: > > Doesn't do anything for me I'm afraid. Not enough interest in the > > foreground to balance the white space above. > > > > This one in your gallery however, is superb: > > > http://www.caguila.com/caguila/fosterbeachfog/content/IMGP3227_large.ht > ml > > > > Chris > > I agree with Chris, both about your Posterous version and about the > other shot (#3227). > Of the water shots in that gallery, I very much prefer this one: > http://www.caguila.com/caguila/fosterbeachfog/content/IMGP3222_large.ht > ml > I would like the gull to be a bit larger, but that is a minor quibble; > I think the composition is right on. > > stan
I agree with Chris and Stan. In addition, with the shot that Chris highlighted I would pretend that I had deliberately intended it to be a panormic shot (2x1) and reframe it with the woman somewhere around an intersection of 3rds. B -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List PDML@pdml.net http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.
