Thanks, Bruce.

I'll see if I can burn that ear in a bit and maybe dodge the background some in Lightroom. I was so focused on getting rid of the shine on her skin (that was one of the last shots of the day, so it was pretty pronounced by then) that I didn't even notice.

The line is clearer in the original version, but I have similar shots that I left in color. I just thought that one was better suited to black & white, and with your suggestions, I think it'll be just right.

Thanks again!

-- Walt

On 7/19/2013 4:20 AM, Bruce Walker wrote:
A very pretty girl, Walt, with a pleasant expression. Nicely oof background.

I'd darken her ear somewhat. A little rim light from behind would have
been nice to separate her hair from the black background, esp. near
her upper forehead, right. Perhaps that line is clearer in the colour
original?

On Fri, Jul 19, 2013 at 12:59 AM, Walt <ldott...@gmail.com> wrote:
Dealing with the horrid heat and humidity sucked pretty badly, but it wasn't
without its rewards. This one is of the oldest child of the family, Amaya.
She has really beautiful skin, and it's a shame I had to photograph her in
the weather as it was, but I thought this turned out pretty damned well in
spite of it all.

http://www.flickriver.com/photos/walt_gilbert/9319667018/
K-5, F50/1.7, 1/90 sec., ISO 100, f/5.6

Comments, critiques and suggestions eagerly accepted.

Thanks!

-- Walt

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