I like the lighting and composition - particularly the fact that you didn't let 
the background go completely black. I don't see the "lunch" though.
It might also be interesting in a square format, tighter on the central web. 
Would make an interesting screen saver . . .

stan

On Aug 9, 2013, at 11:33 PM, <kwal...@peoplepc.com> <kwal...@peoplepc.com> 
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> Interesting comment Jack.
> To me centered is sort of a default composition.
> 
> Kenneth Waller
> http://www.pentaxphotogallery.com/kennethwaller
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> ----- Original Message ----- From: "Jack Davis" <jdavi...@yahoo.com>
> Subject: Re: PESO: 'On the web - part deux'
> 
> 
> This is an example of one of those compositions wherein the principal element 
> is usually more comfortable if centered.
> To me, the image is a bit soft.
> 
> Jack
> 
> 
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> A redo of a previous PESO.
> 
> K20D, 200mm f4.0 ED Macro
> 
> Your thoughts?
> 
> http://photo.net/photodb/photo?photo_id=17490150
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> Kenneth Waller
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