Yes, much, Rick! Jack
----- Original Message ----- From: "eactiv...@aol.com" <eactiv...@aol.com> To: pdml@pdml.net Cc: Sent: Sunday, September 1, 2013 12:10 PM Subject: PESO: Wine on the Vine ver 2 Thanks, Rick. As per suggestions (and thought both Ann and Jack made good pts too about light grapes drawing eye to light left corner), I darkened the left corner (but no blur) and burned down the grapes a little. I like a little light in that area for center of interest. Better? http://mapphotography.com/PAWS/pages/wineII.html ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- ------ Really like this Marnie! Forgive me, but I'm one of those weak picky types who couldn't resist giving that lower left sun struck bit of vine a couple of clicks with the burn tool. Just keeps pulling my eye to it. Jack Really like this Marnie! Forgive me, but I'm one of those weak picky types who couldn't resist giving that lower left sun struck bit of vine a couple of clicks with the burn tool. Just keeps pulling my eye to it. Jack I like it--lighting and colors are very nice, and the composition is very effective. Cheers, Rick In a message dated 9/1/2013 10:43:22 A.M. Pacific Daylight Time, ann...@nyc.rr.com writes: What the boys said :-) maybe clone out the fence line and darken the branch a bit? might be more noticeable because of the light on the grapes that draw your eye over to that corner. ann On 9/1/2013 12:16, Godfrey DiGiorgi wrote: > That's very nice, Marnie. > > As Dan said, the lower left is a little distracting although it doesn't ruin the photo. It would be interesting to suppress it a touch by gently blurring and darkening it. > > G > > On Sep 1, 2013, at 9:10 AM, Daniel J. Matyola <danmaty...@gmail.com> wrote: > >> I like it very much, especially the placement of the bunch of grapes >> in the frame and the big leaf in the lower right. >> >> The bright straight line and light branch to the lower left of the >> grapes are a bit distracting, but do not ruin the image. >> >> Dan Matyola >> http://www.pentaxphotogallery.com/danieljmatyola >> >> >> On Sun, Sep 1, 2013 at 12:06 PM, <eactiv...@aol.com> wrote: >>> Friend and I did a little photo trip fairly recently. Took him to a tiny >>> local vineyard (one field, one hill) that I've shot before. Mainly when it >>> is filled with mustard. Too late for that this year. >>> >>> But when we arrived, I discovered lots and lots of grapes on the vines. >>> Never really seen that before. >>> >>> Nothing great, just liked the fruity abundance of it... >>> >>> http://mapphotography.com/PAWS/pages/wine.html > > -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List PDML@pdml.net http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions. -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List PDML@pdml.net http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions. -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List PDML@pdml.net http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.
