Quoting Ann Sanfedele <ann...@nyc.rr.com>:

Totally missed this the first time around - Like both original and revision - slight pref for the revised - the branch is part of it
can't imagine wwhy you would clone it out.. OTOH this would also work
for me with a quite tight crop on just the window and a small bit of the frame - with interesting stuff as you have here, a lot of variations
would work.. I love rusty old things


Me too.

I didn't really want to clone out the branch but the consensus of comments on the original was that it was a distraction. I like its texture which is why I didn't move it before taking the photo.

I played around with a crop similar to what you suggested but the resulting aspect ratio wasn't appealing to my eye.

Thanks for looking - thanks too Alan, Bob and Jack


Cheers

Brian

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Brian Walters
Western Sydney Australia
http://lyons-ryan.org/southernlight/




On 10/23/2014 02:45, Brian Walters wrote:
Thanks for all the comments and suggestions.

I had a go at cloning out the branch but the right hand side became very
bland and I couldn't get a crop I liked.

Next I tried adding a bit more light to the window and shears and toning
down the branch via a levels adjustment along the lines Paul suggested.

Here's the original:
https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/1370864/PESO/slides/_IGO0302-E10-1-peso.html


Here's the revision:
https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/1370864/PESO/slides/_IGO0302revised-peso.html


Better?  Worse?

I also tried a B&W conversion but I'm not all that keen on it:
https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/1370864/PESO/slides/_IGO0302bw-peso.html




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