Bruce,
It is nice that it is in B&W: one cannot see the blood dripping from where
the limbs were sawed off. :-)
On a serious note, - I enjoy the facial expression in combination with the
upper body and how it was captured (light, etc.).
The well-lit "front" leg is the main distraction for me here.
And the way how the rest of this leg and the hand (arm) are very-similarly
cut off by framing -adds to that distraction.
I tried to "reframe" it by making it a square, - with the horizontal line
at the bottom just below the top of her "back" knee, and the vertical cut
on the left being close to the elbow improved the focus on the face.
Well, that's my look at it.
BTW, the second image of Rachel in this set (23505320634) is better, more
flattering than the 3rd one (24075581775).
Igor
PS. I couldn't help noticing the (almost) circular definition:
The model is .... and model. :D
Bruce Walker Sat, 02 Jan 2016 13:36:06 -0800 wrote:
First peso for 2016 and it's a b&w. Weird! :)
https://www.flickr.com/photos/bruce_m_walker/24050939061/lightbox/
Model is Rachel Cornejo, a dancer (ballet and jazz), fitness
instructor, actor and model.
645z, DFA645 90mm f:2.8 Macro, f:4, 1/125th sec, 100 ISO.
One tall strip softbox left.
Comments and critique welcome.
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